Question

你是李华，你很烦恼。最近，每天早晚，你们小区广场上都有很多人在跳广场舞，持续时间长且噪音大，给你和小区里其他人带来了很多的不便。请给小区委员会领导写封信，反映现象及其导致的不便并提出合理建议。

注意：

词数100左右；

短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

可适当增加细节，使文章语篇连贯。

参考词汇：广场舞square dance

Dear sir,

    I’m writing to tell you something about the people doing the square dance in our community, which has made me terribly upset.                                                   

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                                                                   Yours,

                                                                   Li Hua

Answer

Dear sir,

I’m writing to tell you something about the people doing the square dance in our community, which has made me terribly upset.

Recently, every morning and evening, many people gather to dance in our community square, which does help to keep health. However, the long-time dancing and the noise pollution caused by the loudspeaker really bring about unbearable inconvenience. We can’t rest or sleep well. As a result, the students are not only late for school but also sleepy in class, and the workers are easily tired out while working.

Here are some suggestions to solve the problem. They are supposed either to shorten the dancing time and reduce the music noise or to make another choice of dancing places. Only in this way can they have fun and let others enjoy life.

Would you please communicate with the organizers about what I said?

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时态为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3.

注意语气。要按照正确的书信格式进行写作，问候语和署名。因为所有考生的大致内容都是一样的所以主要是看能不能写出让考官眼前一亮的作文。同时要使文章的内容充实，不能显得无力，考生可根据题干条件适当在作文中添加合适的内容来丰富作文结构。4.考生正确使用复合句和祈使句等较复杂的句式可使作文的分数快速提升到更高水平，例如例文中祈使句Would you please communicate with the organizers about what I said?则使作者的感情显得更加情真意切。

【范文亮点】

Gather to do聚集起来做某事 Keep health保持健康 Noise pollution噪音污染 Caused by由……引起 Bring about引起 As a result结果 Not only…but also…不但……而且…… Tired out十分疲倦

文章中可多增添写类似as a result这样的连词作用的短语，使文章内容更加紧凑，同时也使得句子之间的逻辑感更明确。