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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Alibaba founder Jack Ma, his company has been valued at more than $ 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%, is put in the top position among China’s wealthiest. But he stays outside the list of the world’s 10 rich people.

Fought against a hard life, young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher. Afterwards he started a translation agency in which took him to the US, where he introduced to the Internet. His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang, a co-founder of Yahoo, in a tour of the Great Wall. The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point for all of them, promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with Jerry Yang.

 

1. his→whose  2. owned→owns 3. rich→richest 4. Fought→Fighting 5. 去掉in 6. he和introduced 之间加上was 7. before→when/after  8. in→ on 9. obvious→obviously 10. all→ both 【解析】1. 构造的非限制性定语从句中用关系代词whose,指代上文 Jack Ma的。故his→whose。 2. 考察时态。'马云拥有这21.1亿中的百分之六',是客观事实,所以用一般现在时第三人称单数。故owned→owns。 3.句意:但是他仍然在世界10大富翁之外。这里应该用最高级,表示世界上最富有的10个人,故rich→richest。 4. 现在分词作状语,动词fight和主语 Ma是主动关系。故Fought→Fighting。 5. 关系代词which指代先行词a translation agency,在定语从句中做主语,故去掉in。 6. 主语he和动词introduce是被动关系。故he和introduced 之间加上was。 7. 句意:当他偶然地被任命带美国游客 Jerry Yang参观长城时/之后,他的命运注定要改变。根据句意可知before→when/after。 8. 考察固定搭配。take sb on a tour 带某人去参观。故in→ on。 9. 句意:很明显这次会面对于他们都是转折点。这里应该用副词obviously修饰句子。故obvious→obviously。 10. 句意:很明显这次会面对于他们两位都是转折点。根据上文可知是两个人见面,代词应该用both,故all→ both。 【名师点睛】 现在分词与过去分词作状语的区别 1.逻辑关系 现在分词作状语与过去分词作状语的最主要区别在于:两者与所修饰的主句的主语的逻辑关系的区别。 1) 现在分词作状语时,现在分词所表示的动作与句子主语之间构成逻辑上的主动关系。 He went out, shutting the door behind him. 他出去后将门随手关上。 Not knowing what to do, he went to his parents for help. 由于不知如何办是好,他去找父母帮忙。 2) 过去分词作状语时,过去分词所表示的动作与句子主语之间构成逻辑上的被动关系。 Given more encouragement, the boy could have behaved better. 如果多给这个孩子一些鼓励,他本来会表现得更好。 Faced with difficulties, we must try to overcome them. 在遇到困难时,我们必须设法克服。 3) 部分过去分词来源于系表结构,作状语时不表示“被动关系”,其前不用being。这样的过去分词及短语常见的有:lost in(陷入某种状态)、seated(坐着的)、hidden(躲着)、stationed(驻扎)、lost/absorbed(沉溺于)、 born in(出身于)、dressed in(穿着)、tired of(厌烦了)等。 Lost/Absorbed in deep thought, he didn’t hear the sound. 因为沉溺于思考中,所以他没有听到那个声音。 Born in this beautiful town, he hates to leave it. 出生于这个美丽的小镇,他不愿离开它。 2.时间概念 过去分词所表示的动作发生在谓语动作之前,或表示“一种状态”,与谓语动作同时发生或存在。现在分词的一般式(doing)表示的动作与谓语动作同时发生或在说话时正在进行;现在分词的完成式(having done)表示发生在谓语动作之前的一个“主动”动作;现在分词的完成式的被动式(having been done)常和表示次数的短语及时间段(for+一段时间)连用,表示发生在谓语动作之前的一个“被动动作”,这种情况下不能用过去分词替换,其它情况下通常被过去分词所替换,使句式更简洁。 Written in a hurry, this article was not so good. 因为写得匆忙,这篇文章不是很好。 Reading carefully, he found something he hadn’t known before. 他仔细读书时,发现了一些从前不知道的东西。 Having finished his homework, he went home. 完成了作业,他就回家了。 Having been discussed several times, the decision was finally made. 进行了几次讨论后,终于做出了决定。  
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3.The underlined word “monitor” in the passage means“ ________ ”.

A. find    B. imitate

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4.Which of these statements is true based on the information in the passage?

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