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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I am writing to suggest lift the ban on using smart phones,tablet computers and other mobile devices in class.

Mobile devices came into existence as result of the development of science and technology.They would benefit us a lot as long as they are used proper.First,mobile devices are efficiency and can help teachers know that students understand what is taught when they finish their exercises.Second,mobile devices can make classes more interested so students will be more willing to learn.Finally,using mobile devices will reduce the use of paper,and which will be good for the environment.Please take my suggestion into consider.

Looking forward to you reply.

 

1. lift-→lifting 2. as 和result 之间加a 3. would→will 4. proper→properly 5. efficiency→efficient 6. that→whether/if 7. interested→interesting 8. 删去and或which→it 9. consider→consideration 10. you→your 【解析】文中作者分析了课上使用电子设备的理由,合理使用的好处,希望建议被采纳。 lift→lifting 考查非谓语动词。句意:我现在写信建议解禁课堂上使用手机,平板电脑和其他移动设备。suggest 表示建议,后接动名词。故lift→lifting. as和 result 之间加 a. 考查固定结构,as a result 结果,故as和 result 之间加 a. would→will 考查时态。句意:只要使用恰当,他们对我们益处很大。这里从句用现在时表将来,主句用将来时。故would→will. proper→properly 考查副词,句意:只要它们被恰当使用。这里用副词修饰动词use,指正确使用,故proper →properly. 5. efficiency→efficient 考查形容词。句意:首先,移动设备很有效。此句用形容词作表语,故efficiency→efficient. that→whether/if 考查连词。句意:帮助老师知道学生是否明白所教的内容,表示是否,故that→ whether/if。 interested→interesting 考察形容词。interested “感兴趣的”修饰人;interesting“有趣的”修饰物。此处指移动设备能让课堂更有趣。故interested→interesting. 8. 删去and或which→it 考查句子结构。句意:最后,使用移动设备会减少纸张的使用,这对环境有利。本句可构造非限制性定语从句,删去it;或者构造并列句把which变成it,故删去and或which→it。 9. consider→consideration 考察固定结构。句意:请考虑我的建议。take into consideration考虑,故consider → consideration 10. you→your 考查代词。句意:期待你的回复。这里用形容词性物主代词your修饰名词reply,故you→your。  
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4.A. hard    B. convenient    C. available    D. anxious

5.A. performed    B. figured    C. promoted    D. guaranteed

6.A. opportunity    B. performance    C. permission    D. access

7.A. watched    B. checked    C. noticed    D. tested

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16.A. arrived at    B. reached for    C. left for    D. headed for

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B. LCA is one of the exhibitions at this year's fair.

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D. LCA advises industrial customers to focus on the initial investment.

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B. Low-carbon Economy -a Shared Goal

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