Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

One day a rich man took his son on a trip to the country in order to show his son if the poor lived, so he could be thankful to his wealth. They spent a couple of days and nights on the farm of that would be considered a very poor family. On their return back, the father asked his son to explain what he had learnt. The boy, who had remained silent and deep in thought on the journey home, replying in a way that shocked his father.

The boy said he wanted to become farmer. He envied the farmers who had the beautiful night star to give them light while her family had only expensive lanterns. His wish was to have a farm where he could go swimming in an endless river instead of the garden pool in their home. Finally the boy finished by saying, “Before the trip I thought we were rich but today I have learnt who is true rich.”

With this, the boy got up and walked away, leaving his father sat on their comfortable sofa, totally speechless.

Answer

1.if→how

2.to→for

3.that→what

4.去掉back

5.replying→replied

6.become后边加上a

7.star→stars

8.her→his

9.ture→truly

10.sat→sitting

【解析】本文叙述了一个富人想让儿子看看农场上的穷人如何生活，目的是让儿子领悟到他的生活多幸福。于是带着他在农场上住了几天。当他问儿子这次旅行怎么样。儿子认为农场上的穷人比他们拥有的东西要多，因为农民们拥有大自然里的东西，而他们没有。

第一处：考查副词。句意：一个富人想让儿子看看农场上的穷人如何生活。故将if改为how。

第二处：考查介词。thankful for“对…表示感谢”，故将to 改为for。

第三处：考查连词。句意：他们与农场里与一个被认为非常贫困的家庭待了几天。介词of后引导宾语从句，宾语从句缺少主语，根据句意只能由what引导，故将that改为what。

第四处：考查动词。return意为“返回”，加back后意思重复。故去掉back。

第五处：考查谓语动词。该句中replying应该作谓语动词，故将replying改为replied。

第六处：考查不定冠词。句意：他说他想成为一名农民。在farmer前加不定冠词a，表示泛指一位农民。

第七处：考查名词复数。夜晚的星星不止一颗，应为复数，故将star改为stars。

第八处：考查代词。句意：他羡慕农民们夜晚有美丽的星星给他们照明，而他家只有昂贵的灯。故将her改为his。

第九处：考查副词。修饰形容词rich应使用副词，故将true改为truly。

第十处：考查动名词。leave sb doing“让某人一直处于某种状态”，故将sat改为sitting。