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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I was really sad while I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again and again, I decided buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked very cool that I could hardly wait to ride ft. The shopkeeper told us that it was the latest style. He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn’t afford such an expensive one. Then I choose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect, so it was much better than the old one.

 

1. while-when 2. decided 后如 to 3. locating-located 4. The black bicycle-A black bicycle 5.very cool-so cool 6. charge me for 去掉for 7. that-which 8.choose-chose 9. him-me 10. so-but 【解析】第一处: 考察关系副词 引导时间状语从句,故while改为when. 第二处: 考察介词短语 decide to do 故在decide后加to. 第三处:考察过去分词表被动located in ....坐落于 故改为located. 第四处: 考察冠词 不是特指,故将the改为a. 第五处: 考察连词 so....that... 如此……以至于 故改为so. 第六处: 考察动词 charge ...for..索取 句意是找800元钱。故去掉for. 第七处: 考察关系代词 which引导的句子可加逗号,that不可以.故改为which. 第八处: 考察词性choose是名词 chose为动词 句意:我选择了另一个。故改为chose. 第九处:考察理解 前后主语不一致,逻辑错误。根据i chose another one .故将him改为me. 第十处: 考察关联词 句意:他不是很完美,但比旧的好得多。为转折语气,故填but. 【名师点睛】短文改错主要考察动名词的使用、短语结构、时态变化、语法现象等。有以下三个方面: 第一、动词常见的改错形式:时态和语态,常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时,中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象;或是及物动词后无宾语,或是不及物动词后加了宾语;例如:第二处、decide to do sth ,没有to,显然是不对的,故加上to. 第二、需要接 ing形式的接了to,或相反等。对于这一类错误可根据上下文语境或者句子的平行结构确定动词时态。 第三、句子前后逻辑不通,偷换主语等。例如:第九处,him改成me,前面都是me,这里突然出现一个him,显然不对。故改成me。  
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Tom: Do you believe in UFOs?

Daniel: Of course, they are out there.

Tom: But I’ve never seen them.

Daniel: Many people have. I have read several articles in the newspaper about different people 1.(see) UFOs and aliens.

Tom: They put those articles in the newspaper to attract peopled attention, just for fun. Dont take them too 2. (serious).

Daniel: Well, I didn’t believe those articles either, before I read an article in The Sun

3.there was some interesting 4. (evident). And you know what? I saw UFOs and aliens 5.I was sleeping last night.

Tom: You saw aliens? What did they look like? What were they going to do?

Daniel: They looked like robots. Their task was to make friends6.human beings.

Tom: You talked to them? Oh, come on! You must be 7. (joke)! Surely they must speak alien language. How could you understand each other?

Daniel: They also learn English.

Tom: That's interesting.

Daniel: They even invited me8. (visit) their planet, and I said I would be

9.(delight) to go.

Tom: You can’t be serious! It’s    10.crazy idea!

Daniel: Yeah, I know. But I really want to go and see other planets.

 

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It was lunchtime and I walked into a small branch bank on the West Side. I had come to __ a checking account. The only officer on __ was a fortyish black man, standing __ a small counter from a young white boy who was wearing a V-necked sweater. I thought I was especially __ of the boy because he looked more like from a prep school than a __ in a West Side bank.

The boy continued to __ my attention because of what happened next. He was holding an open savings-account book and __ an expression of disappointment. “But I don’t understand. I opened the account myself, so why can’t I __ any money?” the boy said, his voice breaking.

“I know it is, but those are the rules. I’ve already explained to you that a fourteen-year-old is not __ to withdraw money without a letter from his parents,” the officer explained patiently.

Suddenly I noticed the __ had a series of small deposits (存款)and withdraws. Then I questioned the officer, “How do you __ that? Why did you let him withdraw money before, but not now?” He looked __ . “Because the tellers were not aware of his age before and now they are. It’s really very __” I turned to the boy with a shrug. “You’re really getting __,” I said. “You ought to get your parents to come here and protest.” The boy looked destroyed. __, he put his savings book in a rear-pocket and walked out of the bank.

The officer turned to me. “You know,” he said, “you really shouldn’t have got __.” I couldn’t believe what he was saying. “We were __ this morning that some neighborhood bully has been shaking down (敲诈) this boy for more than a month. The guy was __ him to take money out every week and hand it over. The poor kid was __ too scared to tell anyone. Anyway, the police are on the case and they’ll probably make a(n) __ today.”

“You mean there is no rule about being too young to withdraw money from a savings account?”

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1.A. make    B. open    C. buy    D. choose

2.A. duty    B. board    C. display    D. business

3.A. on    B. after    C. over    D. across

4.A. sure    B. proud    C. aware    D. afraid

5.A. guard    B. customer    C. clerk    D. manager

6.A. attract    B. pay    C. attach    D. control

7.A. achieving    B. finding    C. reaching    D. wearing

8.A. use    B. spend    C. withdraw    D. bank

9.A. supported    B. inspired    C. encouraged    D. allowed

10.A. letter    B. account    C. note    D. message

11.A. think    B. explain    C. do    D. claim

12.A. annoyed    B. disappointed    C. confused    D. amused

13.A. difficult    B. strange    C. fantastic    D. simple

14.A. obeyed    B. stolen    C. cheated    D. caught

15.A. Happily    B. Silently    C. Cheerfully    D. Nervously

16.A. Interacted    B. interrupted    C. Involved    D. infected

17.A. occupied    B. discovered    C. suggested    D. Informed

18.A. rushing    B. forcing    C. requesting    D. begging

19.A. hardly    B. unwillingly    C. apparently    D. eagerly

20.A. arrest    B. sentence    C. apology    D. difference

 

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A few things to do during weekends

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Express appreciation. 4. Be grateful for your family, friends, health, the food you put on the table, the clothes you wear and the air that you breathe.

There you are. Doing a few things during weekends will have a positive long-term effect on your life. 5. .

A. Apply the “no technology” rule.

B. Pause and pay attention to your thoughts.

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G. This is something you should be doing every day, not only on weekends.

 

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My friend Kathy and I were going to Colorado Springs for holiday. The only problem was, I didn’t have any luggage to pack my belongings in.

My friend Debbie offered to lend me a suitcase that belonged to her father, who had passed away long ago. “I don’t know if you’ll want to use it,” she said so gently, “it’s very old, worn out, and such an ugly yellow color." I was so touched by her offer to lend something that belonged to her father, but I was also concerned about the possibility of it being damaged or lost. She insisted that I take it. So with the suitcase safely in hand, I boarded the train with Kathy.

We spent two days and one night on the train, sleeping in our seats. As we slept, we were awakened at times, by the noises of the train pulling in and out of the stations.

The next morning we eagerly awaited the announcement: Next stop, Colorado Springs. But suddenly, there came another announcement over the loud speaker. “During one of the overnight stops, many pieces of luggage were mistakenly removed from the train and left at the wrong location.”

Kathy and I just looked at each other, as I felt the disappointment swell. Could my worst fear be coming true, was Debbie’s suitcase lost?

Just then two train conductors passed our seats. One of them jokingly said to the other, “Did you ever see such an old, ugly, brighter yellow, piece of luggage in all of your life?”

Before the other conductor could answer, I screamed, “YES, MY SUITCASE MADE IT!”

The two conductors stopped in their tracks! and, very red in the face, couldn’t seem to apologize enough for having insulted my suitcase.

When I returned it, I couldn’t wait to get the suitcase back into Debbie’s safe hands. She asked, “Did everything go well on the trip?” Somehow. I just couldn’t resist telling her what had happened. She laughed heartily.

When I recall the golden suitcase, Fm reminded, that like the suitcase, we can see ourselves as too old, useless, worn out, and of little value. Or, we can take a closer look and realize that we are one of God’s most valued creations -- unique, and holding inside our most valuable possessions -- that of love, faith, hope, and wisdom.

1.Hearing the announcements, the author        .

A. was happy to reach the destination

B. felt angry at the service on the train

C. feared that the suit case might be lost

D. asked the conductors to look for the suitcase

2.How did the two conductors feel when the author claimed her suitcase?

A. Puzzled.    B. Embarrassed.

C. Astonished.    D. Amused.

3.From the last paragraph we can learn that          .

A. a friend in need is a friend indeed

B. God helps those who help themselves

C. inner beauty is more important than appearance

D. a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step

4.Which of the following is the best title for the passage?

A. The Golden Suitcase.    B. An Unforgettable Trip.

C. A Warm-hearted Friend.    D. Two Impolite Conductors.

 

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Adult Basic Education (ABE) Preparation

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Description

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ABE classes are open to anyone 18 or over who desires to improve basic reading, writing, and math skills at the pre-college level. Students who are 16 or 17 must obtain an official permission from high school before attending class.

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3.Different courses are offered to different students according to        .

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