Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Mr. Brown，

I am writing to thank you with your kind help. Before you came to teach us, I had not interesting in English. My pronunciation was terribly .I could only speak a few words. But one and a half year later, I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot from your encouraging words. I would always remember what you said. “If you try to, you can be No.1！” I hope you’ll have a pleasant journey home but will come to China again sometimes in the future,  I will write again and send you photos we take together.

Answer

DearMr.Brown，

I am writing to thank you your kind help. Before you came to teach us, I had interest in English. My pronunciation was. I could only speak a few words. But one and a half later, I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot from your encouraging words. I always remember what you said.“If you try , you can be No.1！”I hope you’ll have a pleasant journey home will come to China again in the future, I will write again and send you photos we together.

【解析】第一处：固定搭配thank sb for sth因为某事感谢某人。故with改成for。

第二处：这里的interest表示名词兴趣，所以不能用not，故not改成no。

第三处：这里需要一个形容词来修饰pronunciation，而terribly是副词，所以不行。故terribly改成terrible。

第四处：这里表示一年半的时间，而year是可数名词，所以要用复数。故year改成years。

第五处：这里其实是一个宾语从句，只不过省略了that，所以后面应该跟一个完整的句子，这里缺少谓语动词，又根据句意可知缺少的是be，主语是English故加上is。

第六处：这里用了always,而且后面都开始用一般现在时，所以这里不能用过去时了，故would改成will。
第七处: "if you try to ,you can be No.1” 此句应删去to，因为尝试做什么为try to do sth ，习惯上可以省略 to do sth，故删去to。
第八处：这里前后两部分并没有转折的意思，所以用but不恰当。故可以改成and。

第九处:sometimes表示有时候它后面已经不能再加时间状语了，因为后面有了in the future所以这里应该表示未来的某个时间，故sometimes改成sometime。

第十处：这里其实是一个定语从句，它修饰的是前面的photo，因为那张照片是我们过去照的，所以用过去时，故take改成took。