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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有

10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last winter vacation, my parents and l went back to our hometown, where I spend my childhood. Walking slow in the quiet small town reminded me of the good old day. I went from street to street, in the search of my childhood footprints. Suddenly, I found me at the gate of the primary school on which I studied for six years. As I entered, I was surprised find that the old classroom building was gone. But it was filling with my childhood memories! I felt such sad that tears ran down my checks. It was just like the feeling I had while a good friend left me forever.

 

1. spend→spent;2. slow→slowly;3. day→days;4. search前面的the去掉;5. me→myself;6. on→in;7. surprised后面加to;8. filling→filled;9. such→so;10. while→when 【解析】第一处:根据Last winter可知,用一般过去时态,故把spend改为spent。 第二处:副词修饰动词,故把slow改为slowly。 第三处:句意:提醒我美好的旧时光。不只一天,故用名词复数,故把day改为days。 第四处:固定词组:in search of“搜寻”,故把the去掉。 第五处:句意:我发现我自己在小学门口。动作反射到主语身上,故宾语要用反身代词,故把me改为myself。 第六处:此处the primary school是先行词,在后面的定语从句里作地点状语,表示“在学校里”。故把on改为in。 第七处:固定搭配:be surprised to do sth.“感到吃惊地做某事”,故在surprised后面加to。 第八处:固定词组:be filled with“用……填满”,故把filling改为filled。 第九处:sad是形容词,故用so来修饰,故把such改为so。 第十处:句意:就像一个好朋友永远离开我的感觉。此处表示时间点并不表示时间段,故把while改为when。 【名师点睛】 1.when后的从句谓语动词既可是延续性动词,也可是短暂性动词,而且还可作并列连词,译为“这时”。但以下句型一定用when,作并列连词: 句型A:be about to do…when…正要做…这时(发生另一事) 句型B:was/were doing…when…正在…这时(发生另一事) 句型C:had done…when…刚要做…这时(发生另一事) (1)We were about to set out when it began to rain.我们刚要出发天突然下雨了。 (2)He had hardly sat down when his mobile rang.他刚一坐下手机就响了。 (3)I was walking along the bank of the river when I fell into it.我正沿河岸散步突然掉进水里。 2.while后的从句谓语动词只能是延续性动词,强调主从句的两个动词同时发生;while也可作并列连词,表示两个动作的对比,译为“而”“然而”。 While his mother was cooking in the kitchen, the boy fell asleep in the chair.(在一个延续动作过程中发生另一个动作)。 本题第10小题中的动词leave是短暂性动词,所以不能用while要用When。  
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