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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I will share with you true story that happened a couple of day ago. One of my classmates bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few classmates were then inviting to enjoy the snacks. Unluckily, all of us got poisoned and had stomachaches with their faces pale. They were quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident makes us to realize the seriousness of the food safe problem. Therefore, I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to it.

 

【解析】文章讲述作者身边发生的事情 ,几个同学吃零食中毒,幸亏救治及时才脱离危险,作者强烈建议全社会关注食品安全。 第一处 考察冠词运用。可数名词要么在前面加a/the,要么用复数,所以应是a true story. 第二处 a couple of几个,所以day要变复数。 第三处 考察被动语态。在invite前有be动词were,另外根据句意,应该是“一部分同学被邀请吃零食”,因此用invited表被动。 第四处 考察介词选择。根据句子后半段,with their faces pale可知,前面也应该是all of them got poisoned。 第五处 考察连词。医生给他们做了检查并给他们一些药。是并列关系,故but改为and。 第六处 考察连词。按常理应该是吃了这些药后他们就脱离了危险,所以before改为after。 第七处 考察动词短语。句意为这个事情使我们意识到食品安全问题的严重性。make sb do sth,用省略to的不定式做宾语补足语。 第八处 考察词性。短语意思是食品安全问题,应该用safe的名词形式safety。 第九处 考察词性。我强烈建议全社会关注食品安全。修饰动词suggest应用副词,因此改为strongly。 第十处 考察虚拟语气。suggest后面的从句是虚拟语气,应用(should) do,should可以省略,所以pays改为pay。 【名师点睛】动词常见的改错形式:时态和语态,常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时,中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象;时刻注意动词与主语的关系,判断是否需要变被动形式;另外要考虑虚拟语气、动词是否及物等情况。例如:第三处be invited表被邀请;第十处注意suggest引起的从句常用虚拟语气。 有些词需要在名词、副词、形容词之间进行词性调整。常见的情况是,形容词位于名词之前修饰名词,而副词修饰形容词或动词。另外,名词也可以作为定语来修饰名词,例如第八处,food safety problem。 可数名词要注意前面是否加了冠词,冠词用的是否正确,比如第一处和第二处。ture story 可数名词单数,又是第一次提到,应用a;a couple of应加可数名词复数,改为days. 关于连词,要结合上下文,考虑连词前后句子成分间的关系,是并列、转折或是在时间上存在的先后关系,根据文意判断。  
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