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假定你是李华,你的美国网友Tom因身材瘦小经常受到同学们的欺凌(bully),这...

假定你是李华,你的美国网友Tom因身材瘦小经常受到同学们的欺凌(bully),这令他感到非常苦恼。请你用英语给他写封邮件,主要内容包括:

1. 表不安慰;

2. 进行劝解;

3. 给出建议。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

I’m worried about your being bullied by your classmates.________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

One possible version: Dear Tom, I’m worried about your being bullied by your classmates.I believe everything will be better for you.I also hope you could be optimistic about your life and become the boy who is confident and happy.After all,it isn’t your fault.You don’t need to feel distressed because of others’ behavior.I think it’s time for you to make a change.There are some suggestions I want to share with you. Firstly, you can make yourself stronger with knowledge.As a saying goes,“Knowledge is power.”Secondly, you should talk to your teacher to ask for help.Last but not least,you’d better take part in some events you feel interested in to open your mind and get more chances to get along with your classmates.I hope my advice can help you. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点: 1. 通篇以一般现在时为主。 2. 要点一定要齐全。但中间要自然过渡,不能生硬地罗列。可以使用适当的连接词或过渡句,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然。 3. 注意语气是作为一个好朋友的语气,表达时要言之有物,这样才会有丰富的内容;提建议时可以分条列举,以免重复。可以采用简单句复合句交替、长短句交替的方法,使文章表达形式更多样。 【范文亮点】 1、在hope引导的从句中运用了定语从句,句式高级:I also hope you could be optimistic about your life and become the boy who is confident and happy. 2、运用了last but not least,after all,it’s time for sb等短语和句型来串联文章。在最后一段中分三条从三个方面提出了建议,结构清晰,中间还结合了“知识就是力量”这个名句来说理,言之有物,值得借鉴。 3、语气诚恳真挚,符合一个好朋友的定位。开头就表明I’m worried about your…,I believe everything will be better for you…,较好的传达出了安慰的情绪。  
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