Question

越来越多的汽车进入了我们的家庭，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来了极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请写一篇有关交通安全的短文。

内容包括：1.遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线；

2.别在街道或马路上玩耍和踢球；

3.劝父母不能酒后驾车。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.你可以适当增加内容，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：zebra-crossing斑马线

With more and more cars coining into our families,we are happy that it has greatly improved our life.

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Answer

With more and more cars coming into our families,we are happy that it has greatly improved our life.But luckily, it has also brought many problems,such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

Traffic safety is everybody’s business.We must obey the rules.For example,we must walk on walk side,when we cross zebra-crossing,stop,look right and left,and then go across fast.Don9t play football on the road.We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive,not to run through red lights,not to talk and laugh while driving.

We can say cars are coming into our life,but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody’s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

一、通篇要以一般现在时为主。

二、要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用恰当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自热。

三、注意语气。

这篇文章的写作难点放在第二条上：

内容包括：1.遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线；

2.别在街道或马路上玩耍和踢球；

3.劝父母不能酒后驾车。

可以采用简单句和复合句结合的方法，内容要丰满。

【范文亮点】

范文采取了（not to……not to……not to…）(we can see……)(only when ……can we……)等句式。

文章采用了With more and more，cross zebra-crossing,walking on sidewalks 等高级短语。

【名师点睛】

这是一篇提纲类作文。文章已给出了具体的内容。考生在成文时应发挥自己的句子使用水平，使文章的表达自然、丰满。文章的写作要点齐全，1、we must walk on walk side,when we cross zebra-crossing,stop,look right and left,and then go across fast.2、Don’t play football on the road.3、We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive,not to run through red lights,not to talk and laugh while driving.注意文章的人称，以第一人称为主。时态：一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇和短语，提高文章档次；恰当使用连词，插入语，使文章表达自然。注意字数：80-120之间。