Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than praised by my teacher before my classmates. Never will I forget one experience in an English class last year.

I felt extreme nervous the instant the class began. Mr. Zhang might announce the exam result and I would probably get scolding as before. Surprisingly, when entering the classroom, he glanced at us, saying gently, “Today, I won’t talk about the exam, but I am excited to tell you what Li Jia wrote an excellent English article in the exam.” At hearing what he said, I was so excited that I couldn’t hold back my tear. It was the first time that I have got praised. From then on, I fell in love with the English. I’m grateful to Mr. Zhang. Without her praise, I couldn’t have gone such far in my English study.

Answer

1. praised前加being

2. extreme→extremely

3. scolding→scolded

4. what→that

5. At→On

6. tear→tears

7. have→had

8. English前的the去掉

9. her→his

10. such→so

【解析】1. 考查动名词。句意：作为学生，我可以说，没有什么比在课堂上被老师表扬更好的了。介词than后应用动名词，故在than和praised之间加being。

2. 应该用副词extremely修饰形容词nervous。故extreme改为extremely。

3. 句意：我可能会像以前一样被责骂。此处表示被动，故scolding改为scolded。

4. 句意：我很激动地告诉你们李佳在考试中写了一篇非常优秀的英语作文。此处是宾语从句，连词无意义，不作成分，所以用that引导或去掉。故此题去掉what或改为that。

5. 考查固定介词搭配。on doing表示“一……就……”，故At改为On。

6. 考查名词单复数的用法。tear表示“眼泪”，通常用复数。故tear改为tears。

7. 考查固定句型：It was the first time that sb had done.“这是某人第一次做某事”，从句时态与主句中的be一致，主句用过去时态，故从句也要用一种过去的时态，故have改为had。

8. 句意：从那时起，我爱上了英语。结合语境，学科名词English前不需加定冠词。故去掉the。

9. 结合语境，此处是指代词错误，老师是男的，故her改为his。

10. 句意：没有他的表扬，我不可能在英语学习中走这么远。形容词far前应用so修饰，such修饰名词。故such改为so。