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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或 修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Mommy.

Happy Mother's Day! This is a special holiday because that it is a day for you to feel the appreciation for all you have done for Amy and 1. I am most thankful for all the sacrifices you had made in order for us live the most comfortable lives possible. You put yourself in difficulty situations so that we have food to eat, clean clothes to wear and a warm home to sleep in. Thank you for your endless love and hard works. Your efforts are never taking for granted. I really couldn’t ask for the better mom. Through you, I am able to understand which true love is: loving someone unconditional for what they were, are and will be.

Love,

Anna

 

【解析】作者在文中描述了妈妈一直以来的无私付出,表达了对妈妈的感恩之情。 去掉that.考查句子结构。此处是because引导的原因状语从句,it是从句中的主语,that是多余的。故去掉that. I→me.考查代词。用于介词for后作宾语要用宾格,故I→me. had→have.考查时态。此处表示我感谢你一直以来做出的牺牲,表示动作对现在的影响用现在完成时,故had→have. live前加to.考查固定短语。in order to“为了”,to后加动词原形,此处指为了尽可能舒服地生活,故live前加to. difficulty→difficult.考查形容词。此处修饰名词situations用形容词,指困难的状况。故difficulty→difficult. works→work.考查名词。work作为“工作”之意是不可数名词,没有复数。故works→work. taking→taken.考查非谓语动词。句中主语Your efforts和动词take是被动关系用过去分词,指你的努力被认为是想当然,故taking→taken. the→a.考查冠词。此处指我不可能找到一个更好的妈妈了,比妈妈更好的人。故the→a. which→what.考查宾语从句。此处作understand的宾语且本身有词意,指我能明白真爱是什么,故which→what. unconditional→unconditionally.考查副词。此处修饰动词love用副词,指无条件地去爱,故unconditional→unconditionally.  
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