Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I was shopping with my wife and we have plenty of things to buy. We drove to the centre of the city but stopped our car in front of a shop. An hour later, we came back to the car. But it was strange that we could open the doors. So we asked the policeman for help. He was glad to help us. a few minutes later, he got the door open. Just then a man came up and shouted angry, “What are you doing with my car?” We were surprising and went to see the number of the car. It was not his. We were very embarrassed on that time. What do you think that we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man.

Answer

1.have—had

2. but—and

3. could not

4. policeman前的the 改成a

5.angry—angrily

6. surprising---surprised

7. his---ours

8. on—at

9. think后的that 去掉

10. speak 改成say

【解析】【整体解析】本文是一篇记叙文，主要讲述了一对夫妻开车去市中心购物，他们把车停在超市前，等购物完回去开车时，却打不开车门。随后找警察帮忙，确开错车的一件生活囧事。

1第1处： “I was shopping with my wife and we have plenty of things to buy. ”根据was可知此句时态为过去时，由and可知前后两句为并列句，因此，后句时态也应为过去时。故将have改为had。

第2 处：“ We drove to the centre of the city but stopped our car in front of ashop.”我们开车到市中心并把我们的车停在超市前面。连接词and 表示并列，所以前句与后句表示意思上的并列关系。故将but改为and。

第三处： “An hour later, we came back to the car. But it was strange that we could open the doors.”一小时后，我们回去开车，但是奇怪的是我们打不开车门。根据意思，可知前后句是转折的意思，所以用否定could not。还有，根据后边他们寻找警察帮忙，也可知道他们打不开车门。

第四处："So we asked the policeman for help. "此处的policeman 警察，是第一次在文中出现，并不是特指。故将the改成a。

第五处："Just then a man came up and shouted angry, "。副词修饰动词，shouted是谓语动词，angry是形容词。所以将angry改为angrily。

第六处：“We were surprising and went tosee the number of thecar.”

surprising表示某事某物使人感到惊讶，surprised表示人的感受，人感到惊讶。故将surprising改为surprised。

第七处："It was not his. "分析上下文意思，我们打不开车门和最后我们像那个男人道歉，可知这辆车不是我们的车。故将his改为ous。

第八处： “We were very embarrassed on that time.”我们在那时十分尴尬。此处考查了time的短语应用，“在那时”应为at that time。故将on改为at。

.第九处：“ What do you think that we did then? ”，分析句子，do you think是插入语，不做句子成分。What we did then接下来我们做什么，主谓宾都有，that多余，所以去掉that。

10第十处：“We had to speak sorry to the man.”我们必须给那个人道歉。speak后面跟宾语做及物动词时,宾语一般是某种语言.如:speak English.speak本身是强调说话的方式.speak常用speak to sb。 而say后加的宾语是说话的内容,say强调说话的内容.

【名师点睛】短文改错主要考查考生对文章的理解以及句子结构的分析，考生可以先通读短文，整体把握短文大意再细读全文，逐句分析，把握结构，逐一作答。然后逐行修改最后复读全文，验证答案。主要考查动词时态语态、代词的使用、冠词和连词的使用。 动词常见的改错形式：时态和语态，常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时，中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象；或是及物动词后无宾语，或是不及物动词后加了宾语。应仔细分析句子结构，再进行判断。

例如，第2题“ We drove to the centre of the city but stopped our car in front of a shop.”我们开车到市中心并把我们的车停在超市前面。根据was判断此句整体时态为过去时，由and可知前后两句为并列句，因此，后句时态也应与整句时态相符，应为过去时。故将have改为had.