Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Li Ming as well as his classmates are always helping others.On May Day,his class went to the Senior Center and did some voluntary works.On arriving,they were all warm welcomed.Then they begin to work,cleaning the windows and swept the floor.Everything done,we sat in the yard reading newspapers to the elderly.The manager here praised and thanked them.They felt very proud because of what they did brought joy to others.From their experience, I've learned that the elderly should be paid more attention.So I've made a promise which I will give the elderly as much help as I can.

Answer

【解析】【 1】“Li Ming as well as his classmates are always helping others.”as well as用作连词，连接两个并列的同等成分，其意为“既……又……”连接两个主语时，谓语动词应该和第一个主语保持一致，故应把are改成is。

【2】“Then they begin to work”work为不可数名词，所以应把works改成work。

【3】“On arriving,they were all warm welcomed.”句意:到达后，他们都受到了热烈地欢迎，修饰动词应该用形容词的副词形式，故应把warm改成warmly。

【4】“Then they begin to work”本文是在讲述过去发生的事情，时态应该为一般过去时，故应把begin改成began。

【5】“cleaning the windows and swept the floor”and前后动词应保持一致，故应把swept改成sweeping。

【6】“we sat in the yard reading newspapers to the elderly.”结合全文可知，作者通篇采用的是第三人称，故应把we改成they。

【7】“y.The manager here praised and thanked them”句意:敬老院的经理表扬并且感谢他们，故应把here改成there。

【8】“They felt very proud because of what they did brought joy to others.”because后加句子，而because of 后加短语，故应把of去掉。

【9】“ I've learned that the elderly should be paid more attention.”pay attention to sb意为:对某人注意，被动形式时to不能省略，故应在attention后加to。

【10】这句话属于同位语从句，.So I've made a promise which I will give the elderly as much help as I can.which不能引导，故应把which改成that。

【名师点睛】

动词常见的改错形式：时态和语态，常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时，中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象；或是及物动词后无宾语，或是不及物动词后加了宾语。应仔细分析句子结构，再进行判断。

例如第Then they begin to work本文是在讲述过去发生的事情，时态应该为一般过去时，故应把begin改成began。