Question

假设你是学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim正在学习汉语，但遇到了一些困难，因此他给你发来一封电子邮件。请你给他回复一封邮件，要点如下：

1. 感谢他曾对你英语学习的帮助；

2. 介绍汉语的特点以及学习方法；

3. 邀请他暑假来中国，交流语言学习经验。

注意：1. 词数100左右

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

I’m more than thrilled to receive your email. ____________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Jim,

I am more than thrilled to receive your email. And I can’t thank you more for your advice on my English study, because of which I have made great progress.

As for your language study, I don’t think you have to be so worried. Actually, Chinese is so flexible that you need to understand the definite meaning of a word or phrase in different situations. Moreover, it is difficult for foreigners to write Chinese characters, especially for beginners. So it is better for you to learn some oral Chinese first and then try writing some simple Chinese characters. Just keep in mind that practice makes perfect.

If possible, please come to China during the summer vacation where you can be exposed to the native Chinese language environment in person. We can also share our experience in language learning with each other.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：试题为应用文中的电子邮件写作，试题只给出写作框架，是考查提纲式作文。写好此文，需注意三点：1.是写电子邮件格式要准确，邮件的开头已经给出，但切要写好邮件的结尾。2.是要详略得当，本文要点如下： 感谢他曾对你英语学习的帮助；介绍汉语的特点以及学习方法； 邀请他暑假来中国，交流语言学习经验。3.要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用，并且词数100左右。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇电子邮件，文章格式正确，采用三段式，内容齐全，语言精练，同时使用高级句子。because of what I have made great progress.what引导的介词的宾语从句经典至极；I don’t think you have to be so worried.宾语从句用在句中；Actually, Chinese is so flexible that you need to understand the definite meaning of a word or phrase in different situations.so---that引导的结果状语从句恰到好处；So it iings better for you to learn some oral Chinese first and then try writing some simple Chinese characters.句中it是形式主语，动词不定式的复合结构做真正主语；If possible,运用省略句；please come to China during the summer vacation where you can be exposed to the native Chinese language environment in person.where引导定语从句；另外，As for，Actually, Moreover,等的运用为文章增色添彩。