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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Ë),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The time we have is usual limited. However, even an hour is of much valuable. We should make full use of your time to do useful things. As students, we mustn’t study hard so as to serve for our society and our nation in the future. But it is pity that there are a lot of people who didn’t know the importance of time. They spend their valuable time smoke and drinking. They don’t realize that wasting time is the same as wasting a part of their life. Remember, don’t put off which you can do today until tomorrow.

 

改错: 1.usual→usually 2.However→Therefore 3.valuable→value 4. your→our 5.mustn’t→must 6.去掉for 7. pity前加a 8. didn’t→don’t 9. smoke→smoking 10.which→what 【解析】试题分析:时间是很宝贵的,我们要珍惜时间。 1.usual→usually 考查副词。修饰形容词用副词,所以用usually。 2.However→Therefore 考查连词。上下文之间是因果关系,所以用Therefore。 3.valuable→value 考查名词。be of value有价值,故用value。 4.your→our考查代词。与前文的We保持人称一致,故用our。 5.mustn’t→must考查情态动词。我们必须要努力学习,用must。 6.去掉for 考查动词用法。serve是及物动词,不需要介词,故去掉for。 7.pity前加a 考查冠词。It is a pity that...“……是很可惜的”,pity是可数名词,表示单数前面加a。 8.didn’t→don’t 考查动词时态。本文使用现在时态,所以用don’t。 9.smoke→smoking 考查动词用法。spend time doing sth花时间做某事,用smoking。 10.which→what考查宾语从句连接词。句意:记住,不要把今天能做的拖延到明天。表示“……的东西或事情”,而且在宾语从句中作宾语,故用what。 【名师点睛】 在短文改错中常出现的错误主要有以下几类: 1. 名词单复数用错,可数与不可数名词的混用。 2. 动词:时态和语态,常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时,中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象;或是及物动词后无宾语,或是不及物动词后加了宾语;需要接ing形式的接了to,或相反等。比如第8小题a lot of people who didn’t know the importance of time,本文全文使用现在时,用don’t。 3. 形容词副词:常出现需形容词的地方用了副词或相反;关系副词where, when, why等的缺失或错用,比如第71小题The time we have is usual limited,修饰形容词用副词,所以用usually。 4. 介词:主要是介词的多余或缺失,错用。比如第6小题serve for our society,serve及物动词,不需要介词,故去掉for。 5. 主谓一致性:第三人称单数漏掉s,或主语为复数,谓语动词用了单数;再就是就近原则对主语的影响。 6. 冠词:定冠词the的多余或缺失,如季节,月份,星期,球类及三餐活动,称呼头衔前等不能加the的地方加了the。 7. 数词:主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用。 8. 连词:不合句中的逻辑关系。如需转折连词(如but)的时候用了承接连词(so),或相反等等。比如第2小题The time we have is usual limited. However, even an hour is of much valuable.上下文之间是因果关系。 9. 代词:主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词,单数用了复数代词或相反;应当用形容词性的物主代词用了宾格,主格或相反,关系代词的错用或缺失。 10. 常用固定短语或固定用法及句型用错。  
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