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假定以下是某同学的一篇习作,请你帮助修改。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两...

假定以下是某同学的一篇习作,请你帮助修改。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.  每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起),不计分。

Our class had an exciting basketball match with our neighbor Class four. I had thought that our team was consisted of strong and able players, me including, while opposite team was no match for us. And when the match started, I was amazed to find that each member of the other team was fighting hardly, regardless upon the fact that they were far least capable than us. Therefore, it came as no surprised that we became the winner in the match, but the loser won our respect for their fight in the match. The result of which has taught me,  however the outcome is, what counts is that we have tried our best. Only in this way can we make an improvement in life.

 

1. was(qu) 2. included 3. (Jia) the opposite 4. And -But 5. Hard 6. Upon-of 7. least-less 8. surprise 9. which-it 10. however-whatever 【解析】1.词组 consisted of无被动语态,可知把was去掉。 2.句意:我被包括在内。including me或me included,根据句意可知把including改成included。 3.此处特指对手,用定冠词the。 4.作者认为对手弱,但是当比赛开始的时候,我对对手的强烈对抗感到惊讶。根据句意可知此处表示转折,故把And –But。注意大写开头。 5.句意:但是当比赛开始的时候,我对对手的强烈对抗感到惊讶。根据句意可知把hardly(几乎不)改成hard(努力地、猛烈地). 6.固定词组:regardless of不顾,不管。根据句意可知把upon改成of。 7.根据句中than可知句子用比较级,故把least-less。 8. no修饰名词,no surprise没有意外,根据句意可知把surprised改成surprise。 9.此处指比赛的结果,本句不是定语从句,所以用it指代比赛,故把which-it 。 10.句意:无论结果如何,我们已经尽力了。根据句意可知把 however-whatever。 【名师点睛】 include是动词,而including是介词。因此其用法也是完全不同的。 include指某整体包含或容纳某部分,常用于解释或补充说明。如: The money I gave you included Xiao Zhang's. 我给你的钱里包括了小张的钱。 The money I gave you included all my salaries. 我给你的钱含了我所有的工资。 include常以including(名词/代词前)或included(名词/代词后)的形式出现在短语中,用来举例,解释或补充说明。如: There are ten of us here, including three girls. (=There are ten of us here, three girls included.) Everybody has something to say, me included. (=Everybody has something to say, including me.)本题第2小题,句意:我被包括在内。including me或me included,根据句意可知把including改成included。  
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Today the idiom  10.  (relate) to the story is used to describe a person who stick to rigid rules without considering a changing environment or describes an action made pointless by changing circumstances.

 

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I  ____  and asked if I could help her find something. The woman smiled up at me and showed me a _____  on a piece of paper.  _____  rushing off to find the DVD for the woman, I asked her to  walk with me  ____  I could show her where she could find it and I want to enjoy her  ____ for a moment. As we walked along the back of the store, I ___  its floor plan: old television shows, action movies, cartoons, science fiction. The woman seemed glad of the unrushed  “trip” and _____  conversation.

I said to her daughter,  ____  some advice?” “Of course not,” said the daughter. _____   her ,” I said. “When she's gone, it's the little _____  that will come back to you. Times like this. I know.” It was  ____ . I still missed my mom and remembered the times when I'd used my impatience to make her  ____ .

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1.A. warmth    B. strictness    C. impatience    D. depression

2.A. fixing    B. checking    C. adjusting    D. winding

3.A. accustomed    B. fastened    C. applied    D. stuck

4.A. keep step with    B. get away from    C. keep off    D. escape from

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8.A. because    B. though    C. so    D. unless

9.A. time    B. stay    C. company    D. conversation

10.A. changed    B. described    C. updated    D. ignored

11.A. serious    B. meaningless    C. rough    D. casual

12.A. Offer    B. Mind    C. Take    D. Have

13.A. Forgive    B. Seize    C. Follow    D. Cherish

14.A. chances    B. feelings    C. moments    D. presents

15.A. true    B. impossible    C. unusual    D. rare

16.A. different    B. puzzled    C. upset    D. critical

17.A. expecting    B. observing    C. approaching    D. blaming

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So be a good sport in whatever you do!5. When others see you acting in a way that makes it clear that winning isn't the most important thing, you can move on to focusing on the important things, like having fun, getting exercise, and improving your skills!

A.Good sportsmanship can be shown in many ways.

B.On the contrary, bad sportsmanship is all about disrespect.

C.The example you set can be a powerful teaching tool for others.

D.Players' parents and coaches set examples that kids tend to follow.

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Ralph Buehler teaches urban planning at the Virginia Polytechnic Institute and State University,popularly known as Virginia Tech.He has written a book about urban biking,calledCity Cyclin . g.He says there is a reason why urban bike tiding is now becoming more popular.

“Over the last 60 to 70 years,cities in America have adapted to the automobile.”

“Most cities took advantage of the money coming for the interstate highway system,from the federal government,  starting in 1956.There was a 90 percent federal match(补贴)so the cities only had to put up 10%.It was very tempting.”

In the years after World War Two,many Americans moved to suburban communities,just outside major cities.They decided to travel great distances to and from work in exchange for a home in the suburbs.Their cars became a symbol of freedom.

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Ralph Buehler says governments save money when people use bicycles.“Building bicycling facilities is much cheaper than building and maintaining road facilities or public transport.”

Washington,DC has also taken steps to protect bike riders.It approved a safe passing law and created areas on the road between cars and bikes.

The United States Census Bureau says 4%of the city’s workers ride to work by bike.The only city on the East Coast with more bike commuters is New York.

1.What does the writer mainly talk about in this passage?

A. Bicycling to work in Washington, DC grows in popularity

B. Bikes lead to new problems in Washington,DC

C. Washington,DC has taken steps to protect bike riders

D. People in Washington,DC prefers cars to bicycles

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B. The federal government supported building public transport.

C. Cities didn’t use the money from the government wisely.

D. Urban biking has been popular in the last 60 to 70 years.

3.In the years after World War Two,many Americans prefer to____.

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B. live out of the major cities

C. travel long distances a lot

D. rent houses rather than buy ones

4.What do Ralph Buehler and Greg Billing agree with?

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B. Government should build more bicycle facilities.

C. The cost of living in cities is lower than in the country.

D. More people using bicycles can save money.

 

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2.What are the advantages of robot pets?

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b. Owners needn’t worry about them when going out.

c. They can help cure allergies(过敏).

d. They save space and costs.

A. ab    B. bc

C. bd    D. cd

3.We can learn from the passage that___________.

A. Sony is the first company to produce robot pets Aibo.

B. People can develop strong bond(联系、关系) with their robot pets.

C. Rault thinks robot pets still have a long way to go.

D. Robot toys may help people care more about living beings.

4.The passage mainly tells us___________.

A. the advantages of robot toys    B. the popularity of robot pets

C. living pets are dying out.    D. robot pets are coming.

 

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