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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Have you ever gone to a music festival? During a summer holiday in Hungary, I went to attend my the first music festival. It was really an excitement to us! Since 2002 the Sziget Festival had been running every year in Budapest. It lasts for a week, which famous singers and bands from around the world perform very brilliant. In Hungarian the word ‘sziget’ mean island, which is a very appropriate name although the festival takes place on a large island in the middle of the Danube River in Budapest. Thousands people come on special “party trains” from other country such as France and Italy.

 

【解析】本文介绍了作者第一次参加匈牙利布达佩斯的“Sziget Festival”音乐节的情况。 1. have gone表示已经去了,表示短暂性动作;have been表示曾经去过,表示延续性动作。根据语境可知,此处用have been,故把gone改为been。 2. 名词前面有my修饰,不需要冠词修饰。故把the去掉。 3. 此处是人称错误,上文提到的是我参加音乐节,此处应该用“我”的宾格me。故把us改为me。 4. 根据语境分析,并结合时间状语since 2002,该句应该用现在完成进行时,主语是the Sziget Festival,谓语用has been running,故把had改为has。 5. 此处是一个非限制性定语从句,关系词在从句中作时间状语,应该用关系词when或者把句子改写成用and连接的两个分句。故把which改为when或者and。 6. brilliant在句中修饰谓语动词perform,应该用副词修饰动词。故把brilliant改为brilliantly。 7. 句子主语是“the word ‘sziget’”,是单数可数名词,谓语用第三人称单数,故把mean改为means。 8. 根据句意可知,因为音乐节举办在“Budapest”的“Danube River”上,所以说名字很合适。前后句是因果关系。故把although改为because。 9. 此处表示“成千上万的”,thousands of是固定搭配。故加上of。 10. 此处泛指其他国家,并不是一个国家,应该用复数。故把country改为countries。  
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