Question

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter来信和你就野生动物的保护展开讨论。请你用英语写封加信，主要内容包括：

1．野生动物所处的现状；

2．保护野生动物面临的困难；

3．你的想法。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

I’m writing to discuss with you about wildlife protection. ______________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Peter,

I’m writing to discuss with you about wildlife protection. As we know, some wildlife is in danger due to environmental destruction and many wild animals are on the edge of extinction because of hunting.

Thought it’s necessary to take measures to help those animals, the measures are difficult to carry out. Firstly, many people lack the awareness of wildlife protection, resulting in hunting the animals illegally. Besides, few people are wiling to provide money for animal protection as they think it is of no use to them.

In my opinion, the government should make more laws to protect wildlife. Our schools should teach students to pay attention to wildlife protection. Last but not least, we should do whatever we can to make a difference in the project. Meanwhile, I want to know your opinion.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章主题：你的美国朋友Peter来信和你就野生动物的保护展开讨论，就此话题进行回信，内容要点已经给出：a．野生动物所处的现状；b．保护野生动物面临的困难；c．你的想法。

考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

1.通篇以一般将来时与现在时态为主。

2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。

3. 注意文章要以书信的形式进行叙述，一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。

【范文亮点】

文章以“I’m writing to discuss with you about wildlife protection.”开头，直奔主题，开门见山，引出本文的主题与写信目的；some wildlife is in danger due to environmental destruction and many wild animals are on the edge of extinction because of hunting. 简洁概括了造成野生动物濒危的原因。

2.文章采用了“Firstly、Besides、Last but not least”等连接词，使行文更加流畅，“on the edge of extinction处于灭绝的边缘” “In my opinion在我看来”“ As we know众所周知”“ Meanwhile与此同时”“Looking forward to 期望做某事”等高分词组。