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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In October last year, I was studying at a school in Cambridge but it was only my second months in the school. At an end of the month the head teacher organized a party for all the new students. It is a good chance to get to know my new classmates and I really looked forward to join in it. As the party was on 31st October, I thought it was a Halloween party. So, the day after the party, I searched everywhere and managed get a witch’s costume. When I arrived at my head teacher’s house, he opened the door and looked at us if I had been complete mad.

All the other students wore on normal clothes!

 

【解析】第一处:In October last year, I was studying at a school in Cambridge and it was only my second month in the school.关联词前后两分句表达的意思一致,不含转折语气,故用and连接。故将but改为and。 第二处:In October last year, I was studying at a school in Cambridge and it was only my second month in the school.second,第二,指第二个月,用单数。故将months改为month。 第三处:At the end of the month the head teacher organized a party for all the new students.此处为固定搭配。At the end of,在……的末尾,在……结束的时候。故将an改为the。 第四处:It was a good chance to get to know my new classmates and I really looked forward to joining in it.由第一句“ In October last year”可知,讲述过去的事情,应用过去时态。故将is改为was。 第五处:It was a good chance to get to know my new classmates and I really looked forward to joining in it.look forward to doing sth.为固定搭配,意思为期望做某事。故将join改为joining。 第六处:So, the day before the party, I searched everywhere and managed to get a witch’s costume.由上下文知,此处意为在party开始前找合适的服装,before在……前。故将after改为before。 第七处::So, the day before the party, I searched everywhere and managed to get a witch’s costume.manage to do sth.试图,设法做某事,为固定搭配。句意为想要找到合适的服装。故在此处加上to。 第八处:When I arrived at my head teacher’s house, he opened the door and looked at me if I had been completely mad.由后面i可知,此处指“我”一个人,主语是单数。故将us改为me。 第九处。When I arrived at my head teacher’s house, he opened the door and looked at me if I had been completely mad.此处意为班主任想看“我”是不是完全疯了。副词修饰形容词作状语。故将complete改为completely。 第十处:All the other students wore normal clothes!wear on意为缓慢进行,时间消逝;用在此处不合题意。wear,穿着,后面直接加宾语。故将on删掉。  
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G.For others, finding physical humour and non-serious accidents funny seems cruel.

 

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I was driving home from the gym with my children. It was approaching bed time.

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My advice to you? Eat a banana and go to bed. You’ll feel a lot better and be your fresh self in the morning.

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D. hold on to the wrong things

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B. Supportive.

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D. Doubtful.

3.When you are suffering “Banana Bone”, you had better______________.

A. distract and refresh yourself

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C. break down your old habits and give up

D. ask doctors for clear guidance

4.What can be the best title for the text?

A. Bone Made of Banana

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C. Miracle Banana

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