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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I liked cycling very much. At age of twelve, my father bought me a bike as a birthday gifts and taught me how to ride. Every time my father took him out for practice, my little brother would come along. One day, we were practicing while suddenly my brother screamed to help. When we rushed to him, we saw a snake wind around a frog tightly. I beg my father to save the frog. Immediate he picked it up a long stick, trying to drive the snake away. About two minutes later, the frog was set loose, what made us so happy.

 

【解析】第一处:考查定冠词。at the age of是固定搭配,表示“在……的年龄”,故要在age前加the。 第二处:考查名词。此处表示一个生日礼物,应该用单数,故把gifts改为gift。 第三处:考查代词。此处是说爸爸带我出去,故要将him改为me。 第四处:考查连词。be doing when…是固定搭配,表示“正在做某事这时……”,故要将while 改为when。 第五处:考查介词。scream for表示“为……而叫喊”,故要将to改为 for。 第六处:考查非谓语动词。see doing表示“看见正在做”,故要将wind改为winding。 第七处:考查时态。讲述发生在过去的事情,应该用一般过去时,故要将beg改为begged。 第八处:考副词。修饰动词picked应该用副词,故要将Immediate改为Immediately。 第九处:考查代词。此处是说捡起一根长木棍,it是多余的,故要将it去掉。 第十处:考查非限定性定语从句。此处为非限定性定语从句,指代前面的整个内容用which,故要将what改为which。 【名师点睛】短文改错的设题点分布通常是8个改词,1个加词和1个删词,其中加词和删词最容易出现在对冠词、介词及代词的考查,同学们一定要注意有一些加冠词的搭配,比如像at the age of,make a difference等。  
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