Question

假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom下个月要来中国参观你所在的城市。现来信询问你所在城市的天气、食物、交通等信息。请你回信告知情况。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? I’m more than happy to hear that you will come to China next month. Now let me tell you something different you may meet here.

To start with, the weather here is totally different from that in your place. It hardly rains but whenever it does, it rains heavily. So you’d better bring a raincoat with you. Another big challenge is food. To be honest, the Chinese food differs from yours, so you have to try to get accustomed to it and learn how to use chopsticks. As for traffic, you can take a bus or subway to nearly anywhere you want to. More importantly, it’s cheap and convenient.

I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，文章要点已经给出，在写这篇文章时要注意以下几点：

1.整篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。

2.要点要齐全，但是不要进行简单的罗列，可以采用适当的连接词，或者是表递进关系的副词如To start with、So、More importantly，使上下文衔接自然，行文自然流畅。

3.此作文要分三个部分写，最开始点出两地的不同，中间的这一段最好用简单句与复合句结合的方法来写具体的不同点，如天气，食物和交通，最后来做一个总结，表达一下自己的欢迎之情。

4.多采用一些高级句型，同时使用一些词组如looking forward to，get accustomed to等。

5.注意文章要以一定的逻辑顺序进行叙述，一定要把各方观点叙述清楚，细节把控要到位。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。

【范文亮点】

提纲性文章难点：扩充成句，因为提纲性文章主题内容已经基本列出，在将短句扩充时，要精炼。其中要注意尽量用高级词汇和复杂句是来表达，如强调句，定语从句等，就如I’m more than happy to hear that you will come to China next month。再者就是要多使用一些高级词汇与词组，如文中looking forward to以及get accustomed to等。最后就是段落清新，层次分明。