Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改: 在错词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I’ve learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for receptionist (接待员). I’m very interesting in the job and I’d like to apply to the job.

First of all, allow me to introduce myself. I had just graduated from senior high school and taken the College Entrance Examination. I want to find out a part-time job in summer. I’m 18 year old and have a good knowledge of English, especial in terms of speaking and listening. In fact, I once won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school. Besides, I’m quite easy-going but therefore very popular among my classmates.

I sincerely hope you can give us a chance. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Answer

1. looking for receptionist for 后加a

2. very interesting in interesting改为interested

3. apply to the job to改为for

4. I had just had改为have

5. I want to find out 去掉out

6. I’m 18 year old year改为years

7. especial in terms of especial改为especially

8. hold in our school hold改为held

9. but therefore but改为and

10. give us a chance us改为me

【解析】1 receptionist为可数名词。故在前面加a。

2 be interested in 为固定搭配。故将interesting改为interested。

3 apply for sth申请某物，为固定搭配。故将to改为for。

4 I had just graduated from senior high school and taken the College Entrance Examination.。我刚刚参加高考，高中毕业，应用现在完成时。故将had改为have。

5 find out 意思是弄清楚，查明白。此处是“找到一份兼职工作”。故将out去掉。

6 18为复数。故将year改为years.

7 in terms of 意思为“就….而言”，应用副词修饰。故将especial改为especially。

8 I once won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school。这句话的意思为“我曾经赢得了在我校举行的英语演讲比赛的第一名。”这句话的谓语动词为won, held应为过去分词做后置定语。故将hold改为held。

9 此句意思为“我非常好相处因此很受欢迎”，表示一种顺接关系。故将but改为and。

10 给我一个机会。人称代词使用错误。故将us改为me。