Question

假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear fellows,

Not only adults but also we students often feel stressing because we have too much homework to do, and we are very busy study every day, we don’t have our own time to do that we are interested in. We are very tried and asleep all day, because we should learn to deal with it. What should we do next relax?

From the result of the survey, I think doing sports with classmate is a good way to relax. Because it’s good for our health and it can make us relaxed. I also have three ways to relax us. First, we can listen to music. Second, we can go to the movies with our parents in weekends. Don’t study at home all the weekend. Third we feel tired, we can think about something interested.

Answer

1.stressing---- stressed

2. busy study---busy studying

3. that---what

4. asleep---- sleepy

5. because-----so

6. classmate---classmates

7. relax us ----relax ourselves

8. the music ---the 去掉

9.in weekends---- on/at weekends

10 interested---interesting

【解析】【1】Not only adults but also we students often feel stressing，以ing和ed 结尾的形容词的区别： 以ing结尾的动词变化而来的形容词一般修饰物，译为“令人…的”，常作定语，主要用于说明事物，表示事物的性质或特征，若用它们说明人，则表示此人具有此性质或特征。 以-ed结尾的动词变化而来的形容词一般修饰人，译为“（人）…的”故应把ing改成ed。

【2】we are very busy study every day,固定搭配be busy doing sth意为：忙于做某事故应把busy study改成busy studying 。

【3】we don’t have our own time to do that we are interested in，分析句子成分可知关系代词应做interested in 的宾语，所以应把 that改成what。

【4】We are very tried and asleep all day，sleepy意为：困倦的，昏昏欲睡的；asleep意为：睡着的，根据句意应该把asleep改成sleepy。

【5】because we should learn to deal with it，句意：我们应该学会处理它，和上句是因果关系，上句是因，这句是果，故应把because改成so 。

【6】I think doing sports with classmate is a good way to relax.由常识可知应该不只一个同学，且classmate为可数名词，故应把 classmate改成classmates 。

【7】I also have three ways to relax us.为避免重复，可用反身代词做宾语，故应把relax us 改成relax ourselves 。

【8】 First, we can listen to the music，这里没有特指哪个音乐，所以应把the去掉。

【9】we can go to the movies with our parents in weekends.常用固定搭配on/at weekends意为：在周末。故应把in weekends改成on/at weekends。

【10】we can think about something interested，以ing和ed 结尾的形容词的区别： 以ing结尾的动词变化而来的形容词一般修饰物，译为“令人…的”，常作定语，主要用于说明事物，表示事物的性质或特征，若用它们说明人，则表示此人具有此性质或特征。 以-ed结尾的动词变化而来的形容词一般修饰人，译为“（人）…的”

【名师点睛】短文改错主要考查考生对文章的理解以及句子结构的分析，考生可以先通读短文，整体把握短文大意再细读全文，逐句分析，把握结构，逐一作答。然后逐行修改最后复读全文，验证答案。主要考查名词单复数、动词时态语态、代词的使用、冠词的使用。考察名词单复数，可根据句意和名词属性是可数名词还是不可数名词，对名词单复数进行判断，例如第６，I think doing sports with classmate is a good way to relax.根据句意：我认为和同学做运动是放松的好办法，根据常识，不只是和一位同学一起做运动，classmate为可数名词，所以这里应该用名词复数classmates，故应把classmate改成classmates 。