假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week our class voted on how to do for you class outing: visit the Singapore Zoo and go to the Night Safari(夜间动物园). We girls wanted to go to the zoo, but since we are in minority, we lost to the boys, that all wanted the safari. We got the admission rate for the students, which was great since I still had not enough money to buy a brochure about the park as well as something at the souvenir shops. The safari was scary(吓人的)but real fun. As we took the ride across the park’s dark jungle, we could see the eyes of many creatures look at us. Most of the animal there sleep when there sunlight and wake up at night.
Julie was at a crossroads. She had just graduated from university 1.was ready to begin life as an independent adult. She had already received some great job 2.(offer) from several major companies and was very3.(excite)about the opportunities. While4.(clean) out her dormitory room on her last day at university, she 5.(receive) an unexpected phone call. The6.(call) greeted her in careful English and then introduced himself as representing 7.international association. He had met Julie a few weeks ago at a job fair(招聘会)and 8.(impress) with her spoken English. The only difficulty was 9.his company was in the country of Colombia. Julie was 10.(curiously)to find out more, so after talking with her parents that evening, she booked a flight to South America.
1.This is the o______________(起源，由来)of the seasons on Earth.
2.The Church has something to say on how to c_________________(结合，联合)freedom with responsibility.
3.I was a quiet and g______________(温和的，文雅的)man who liked sports and enjoyed life.
4.On the way, we s____________(发现，注意到)a man holding a piece of paper that said, “Lost my job, family to feed.”
5.His family then moved to a s_______________(稍微，轻微地)larger house.
6.The Canadians plan to d_________________(递送)more food to southern Somalia.
7.So far, Mr. Cook has not c_____________(评论)on these reports.
8.Someone had furnished the place on a tight b___________________(预算；开支).
9.We know that the taste in art is a s______________(主观的)matter.
10.I think these traditional customs should be p________________(保存；保留).
I drove to a local supermarket the other day. My shopping list was _______and my wallet was light. Still, I needed to get a week’s worth of groceries for my family. I parked my car, looked down at my list, and hoped I could _____ it all. As I _____ the door, I saw a man with kind eyes and a gentle _____. He said he was collecting for a local food bank that helped to _____ the hungry in my area. He handed me a second shopping list of things they could use and asked me to _____ if I could. I smiled back, took the _____ and walked into the store. I really wanted to help, but wasn’t sure if I could this time.
I walked through the store, picking up vegetables, soup, spaghetti, bread, milk, cereal, macaroni, bananas, and a dozen other things. I slowly _____ each item off my list until I was done. When I looked down at my full cart I _____ again if I even had enough to pay for it all. Then, as I put my own list back into my pocket, I saw the food _____ list under it. I smiled and decided to trust my heart.
With the food bank in mind, I went over and _____ two of the biggest boxes of rice the store had and put them in my cart. It took _____ six dollars out of my wallet to pay for them, ______ my heart felt six times larger when I did. And when everything was _____, I had just enough to pay for it all.
It _____ so little to make our world a better place. A few dollars can help to fill a child’s _______ belly(肚子). A smile and hug can help to heal(愈合)a hurting heart. An______word can inspire someone else to live and to love. A random _____ of kindness can change another’s day and life. It is up to us, _____. If we can ______a few dollars on rice , then we can share a love that will last forever.
1.A. short B. long C. frequent D. heavy
2.A. offer B. exchange C. afford D. accept
3.A. approached B. painted C. cleaned D. left
4.A. attitude B. manner C. smile D. anger
5.A. share B. train C. protect D. feed
6.A. advertise B. write C. help D. search
7.A. name B. list C. project D. budget
8.A. signed B. rid C. marked D. separated
9.A. wandered B. amazed C. fancied D. wondered
10.A. store B. cart C. bank D. nutrition
11.A. picked out B. lifted up C. picked up D. folded up
12.A. other B. others C. another D. more
13.A. but B. so C. and D. since
14.A. ordered B. totaled C. replaced D. packed
15.A. takes B. spends C. pays D. wastes
16.A. anxious B. adequate C. hungry D. full
17.A. encouraging B. excited C. encouraged D. disappointing
18.A. ability B. act C. appreciation D. allowance
19.A. although B. still C. yet D. though
20.A. save B. rescue C. accumulate D. reserve
Have you ever heard of homecoming? It’s a tradition celebrated every year in the US. At homecoming, a school or university welcomes back former students or alumni(校友). 1.It means, “coming home.”
This is a time when everyone can get together. 2.There are events that encourage school spirit all throughout homecoming week, which leads to the big day on Friday.
A major activity that most students will take part in is choosing the homecoming king and queen.3.This is a group of boys and girls who represent (代表) school spirit. At the end of the week, students vote for a boy and a girl to be the king and the queen.
Then it’s time for the football game, the main event of homecoming week! 4.Almost everyone from school goes to the game: students, parents, teachers, and alumni visitors. If they win, everyone is very happy.
5. Students dress up, and some might even bring a date to go with them. After the dance, homecoming is officially over, and everyone can’t wait for next year!
A. The last event is the homecoming dance.
B. That is where the name comes from.
C. Students get to pick who will be on homecoming court early in the week.
D. The tradition began more than 100 years ago in the United States.
E. The football team faces a lot of pressure to do well for the big crowd.
F. Homecoming usually lasts a week and happens in the fall.
G. Homecoming week was not just about fun, but also a chance to try out new things.
A warm drink of milk before bed has long been the best choice for those wanting a good night’s sleep. But now a study has found it really does help people nod off-if it is milked from a cow at night.
Researchers have discovered that “night milk” contains more melatonin(褪黑激素), which has been proven to help people feel sleepy and reduce anxiety.
The study, by researchers from Seoul, South Korea, involved mice being fed with dried milk powder made from cows milked both during the day and at night.
Those given night milk, which contained 10 times the amount of melatonin, were less active and less anxious than those fed with the milk collected during daytime, according to the study published in The Journal of Medicinal Food.
Night milk quickened the start of sleep and caused the mice to sleep longer.
While the effect of cows milk harvested at different time has not been tested on humans up to now, taking melatonin drugs has been suggested to those who are struggling to fall asleep at night.
Previous studies have also indicated that milk can be excellent for helping sleep because of the calcium content, which helps people to relax.
Milk is also sugar-free and additive-free with nutritionists recommending skimmed milk as the best choice before bed as it is the least fattening. The more fat you take in before bedtime, the greater burden you will put on your body at night.
1.According to the text, the mice fed with daytime milk_______.
A. started sleep more easily
B. were less active
C. were more anxious
D. woke up later
2.Which of the following is true of melatonin according to the text?
A. It’s used in sleeping drugs
B. It exists in milk in great amount
C. It can make people more energetic
D. It’s been tested on mice for ten years
3.What can be a suitable title for the text?
A. Milk Drinking and Health B. Fat, Sugar and Health
C. Night Milk and Sleep D. An Experiment on Mice
