Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Saturday,Mr.Wang is invited to dinner by his friends.He was so glad and he drank a lot of beers.As the result,he got drunk.After the meal,his friends persuaded him not drive,but he insisted on drive home.Fortunately,the car he drove ran into a tall tree a few minute later.Worse still,he was badly injurying.Soon the police came to the scene and sent her to the hospital.Now he has stayed in hospital for several days and is waiting for being fined by the police.How Mr.Wang regrets what he did it!

Answer

【解析】从“Last Saturday”可知，本文叙述的是过去的事情，谓语动词需要用过去式。故将is改为was。

“He was so glad and he drank a lot of beers”他是如此的开心，他喝了很多啤酒。根据句意可分析，后句喝很多啤酒是因为太开心了。“So ……that……”属固定句式，意为“太……以至于”。故将and改为that。

“As a result”属固定搭配，意为结果。故将the改为a。

“persuad sb to do sth”属固定句式，意为“说服某人做某事”。故在drive前加to。

介词后跟动词时，需要将动词改为动名词。故将drive改为driving。

“Fortunately,the car he drove ran into a tall tree a few minute later” 他开车撞到了一棵高高的树上。根据句意分析，开成撞树是一件不幸的事。故将Fortunately改为Unfortunately。

“a few ”后跟可数名词复数形式。故将“minute”改为“minutes”。

“he was badly injurying”分析句意及语法知识可知，他是被伤害的。故将injurying改为injured。

“sent her to the hospital.”此句中，从前文可知，文章主人公是男人。故将her改为him。

“How Mr.Wang regrets what he did it!”分析此句，what引导宾语从句，且在从句中作宾语。故从句中的宾语it多余。故将it去掉。