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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I'd like to talking about my most memorable experience. It was the trip to Australia I had three years before with my dance group to participate in international dance festival. It was the first time that I had travelled by plane in my life. My mum worried a lot, so everything went smoothly. I stayed there for two week and it was the happiest time in my life. Besides our performances there, we have much excitement. We spent on almost every morning sunbathing on the beautiful beach and swam in the blue sea. But warmly Australian nights were which I adored most of all. It was a time of joy, lights, music and summer parties.

 

1.talking改为talk 2.before改为ago 3.international前加an 4.so改为but 5.week改为weeks 6.have (much excitement)改为had 7.spent后的on删去 8.swam改为swimming 9.warmly改为warm 10.which改为what 【解析】1. 句意:我想要谈谈我最难忘的经历。would like to do“愿意做,想要做”,故 talking改为talk。 2. 句意:那是三年前我和我的舞蹈队一起去澳大利亚参加一次国际舞蹈节的旅行。前面有时间短语three years,句子用的是一般过去时,故表示“以前”要用ago。故before改为ago。 3. 考查冠词。international dance festival这里泛指一次国际舞蹈节,故在international前加an。 4. 考查连词。句意:我的妈妈很担心,但是一切都进展的很顺利。前后句是转折关系,故so改为but。 5. 考查可数名词的数。句意:我在那儿呆了两个星期。week是可数名词,这里是两个星期,应该用其复数形式,故week改为weeks。 6. 考查时态。句意:除了我们那儿的表演以外,我们玩得也非常开心。根据语境可知,本文描述三年前的经历,用一般过去时。故have改为had。 7. 考查固定结构。句意:我们每天早上在美丽的海滩晒日光浴,以及在蓝色的大海里游泳。本题考查spend 时间(in)doing sth的结构,故spent后的on删去。 8. 这里的“在美丽的海滩晒日光浴”和“在蓝色的大海游泳”都是我们“spend花费”每天早上做的事,是并列的动词,故swam改为swimming。 9. 考查形容词和副词的用法。句意:但是温暖的澳大利亚夜晚是我最喜欢的。这里用形容词warm修饰名词night,故warmly改为warm。 10. 考查表语从句。句意:但是温暖的澳大利亚夜晚是我最喜欢的。be动词were 后构造了表语从句,表语从句缺少宾语,根据句意用what。故which改为what。 【名师点睛】 spend的用法: spend的主语必须是人,常用于以下结构: spend time /money on sth.在……上花费时间(金钱)。 例:I spent two hours on this maths problem. 这道数学题花了我两个小时. spend time /money (in) doing sth.花费时间(金钱)做某事。例: They spent two years (in) building this bridge. 造这座桥花了他们两年时间. spend money for sth. 花钱买……。例: His money was spent for books. 他的钱用来买书了。 其他表示“花费”的词语cost,take和pay的用法: 1. cost的主语是物或某种活动,还可以表示“值”,常见用法如下: (1)sth. costs (sb.) +金钱,某物花了(某人)多少钱。 例:A new computer costs a lot of money. 买一台新电脑要花一大笔钱。 (2)(doing) sth. costs (sb.) +时间,某物(做某事)花了(某人)多少时间。 例:Remembering these new words cost him a lot of time. 他花了大量时间才记住了这些单词。 注意:cost的过去式及过去分词都是cost,并且不能用于被动句。 2. take后面常跟双宾语,常见用法有以下几种: (1)It takes sb. +时间+to do sth. 做某事花了某人多少时间。 例:It took them three years to build this road. 他们用了三年时间修完了这条路。(2)doing sth. takes sb. +时间,做某事花了某人多少时间。 例:Repairing this car took him the whole afternoon. 他花了一下午修车。 3. pay的基本用法是: (1)pay (sb.) money for sth. 付钱(给某人)买……。 例:I have to pay them 20 pounds for this room each month. 我每个月要付20英磅的房租。 (2)pay for sth. 付……的钱。 例:I have to pay for the book lost. 我不得不赔丢失的书款。 (3)pay for sb. 替某人付钱。 例:Don’t worry! I’ll pay for you. 别担心,我会给你付钱的。 (4)pay sb. 付钱给某人。 例:They pay us every month. 他们每月给我们报酬。 (5)pay money back 还钱 例:May I borrow 12 yuan from you? I'll pay it back next week. 你能借给我12块钱吗?下周还你。 (6)pay off one's money还清钱。  
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