Question

假设你是中学生李华，6月5日是“世界环境日”，你校开展了相关志愿者活动，请给你的美国笔友Mike写一封电子邮件，介绍此次活动，内容请包括：

1．时间、地点；

2．开展的具体活动；

3．你的看法。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3.参考词汇：世界环境日World Environment Day ;志愿者的 voluntary

Dear Mike,

How is everything going?

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Mike,

How is everything going?. June 5th is World Environment Day, so our school organized the voluntary activity. Let me tell you about it.

On the morning of June 5th, we gathered in the People’s Square. Then, we carried out many activities. First, we performed a play about our environment, which attracted a lot of audiences. After that, we gave out leaflets to passers-by to arouse people’s awareness of environmental protection. In the end, we picked up the litter and cleaned the chairs in the Square.

In my opinion, the activity is really meaningful. On the one hand, all of us have learned the importance of protecting the environment. On the other hand, we have not only done our part, but also encouraged other citizens to protect it.

Do you have such voluntary activities? Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇邮件，文章内容要点已经给出，同学们在写邮件的过程中应该注意几点：

1.邮件的格式正确性，信件开头和结尾格式较为固定，但根据题干要求，写信对象的不同可稍作调整。例如本题中，收件人为Mike，落款为李华。

2.写邮件一般开门见山，交代写邮件的原因，便于读信人了解邮件重点。

3.注意文章要以一定的逻辑顺序进行叙述，既满足题目要求又能把内容表达清楚。范文首先点明主题：告诉Mike关于“世界环境日”时学校的志愿活动。开头给出了时间、地点，接着又列举了活动的具体内容，最后表达了自己对这项活动的看法和其积极意义，内容连贯通畅。

【范文亮点】

优秀词汇和短语：How is everything going? 最近怎么样？，carry out实施，First首先， After that之后，In the end最后，not only…but also…不仅…而且…

优秀句式和行文脉络：

1. First, we performed a play about our environment, which attracted a lot of audiences.使用了非限制性定语从句。

2.全文运用了In my opinion，One the one hand，On the other hand这些连接词表达自己的观点，使行文流畅。而且全文逻辑清晰，观点鲜明。