Question

请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The earthquake affects the students of the destroying areas in many ways. How can we help them? One expert says the child will have feelings of fear, angry and feel they are not safe after the quake. They will find it hardly to focus. They will tend to cry and shout and tremble. And they might be afraid to be alone. The teenagers will find it difficulty to live in a balanced way. If things get worse they might not be able to concentrate to their studies. He also says we can do something help the children. The first thing we can do is that to build up trust with them, and be their friends. Then you have to give them sense of safety. Thirdly, try to satisfy their psychological needs. Be a good listener, if he or she need to talk.

Answer

1. destroying ---destroyed

2. child---children

3. angry----anger

4. hardly----hard

5. difficulty----difficult

6. (focus) to --- on

7. do something help中help前加to

8. the first thing is that to 中去掉that

9. safe----safety

10. need----needs

【解析】1. 被破坏地区，应该用过去分词，地区与破坏之间为被动关系。

2. 专家们说孩子们会害怕，生气。。。，不是一个孩子，所以用复数。

3. feelings of fear, angry，介词of后要用名词，所以用anger，不用angry。

4. 他们发现很难集中注意力。Find it hard to focus 此句中hard作宾语补足语，用形容词。

5. 青少年发现很难生活的平衡。Find it difficult to live in 此句中也是用形容词做补足语。

6. concentrate to搭配错误，应该为concentrate on

7. 他总是说我们能做些事情来帮助孩子们。To do 不定式做目的状语。

8.The first thing is to do...此句中不定式作表语，不需要that

9. 给他们一种安全感。 A sense of safety……

10.if he or she need to talk. 此句中need用第三人称单数。

名师点睛：

短文改错解题思路和检查原则：

1.句中各部分的结构是否完整，特别是每个句子要有动词;

2. 谓语动词的时态、语态;

3.非谓语动词的用法;

4.名词的单、复数，格的使用是否正确;

5.定冠词和不定冠词是否正确;

6.代词的格和性的使用是否有误;

7.定语从句中关系代词、副词是否准确无误;

8.并列句中的并列连词、主从复合句中的从属连词用的是否得当。

短文改错解题四原则：改动以最少为原则; 虚词以添加或删除为原则; 实词以改变词形为原则以保持句子原意为原则。短文改错解题步骤：通读全文，掌握大意; 整句分析，逐行推敲。

此题的主要错误类型有：

非谓语动词的用法;

名词单复数

词性转换

形容词副词

固定搭配

冠词

主谓一致

下面重点讲解一下词性转换题：

如此题中的第3个错误：feelings of fear, angry，可知介词后要用名词，angry 是形容词，anger是名词。

第5个错误：The teenagers will find it difficulty to live in a balanced way.此错误中，difficulty是名词，宾语补足语应该用形容词。