Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有

10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last month, I gave some of my clothes to a girl who needed it because her parents didn't have money to buy her newly clothes.  In school, this girl was the victim of bullying because of the clothes that she wears.S0 1 went home and was told mom that I'd like collect something for her. Knew what she suffered in the school broke my heart. Sometimes young people are so mean to others which don't have the money to buy some expensive thing. This has to change because it is not clothes or shoes that makes a person.  It is what we have in our heart but our soul that matters.

Answer

【解析】1.考查代词。句意：上个月，我把我的一些衣服给了一位需要衣服的女孩子。这里需要用them指代上文的复数名词clothes，故it---them。

2.句意：因为她的父母没有钱给她买新衣服。这里用形容词new做名词clothes的定语，故newly---new。

3.句意：在学校，这个女孩是被欺负的对象因为她穿的衣服。根据上下文时态以及时态一致，可知wears---wore。

4.句意：因此，我想回家告诉妈妈我想给她拿些衣服。根据句意可知，主语I和动词tell是主动关系，故删去was。

5.考查固定用法would like to想要，故在like和collect之间加上to。

6.考查动名词作主语。句意：知道她在学校的遭遇让我很心痛。这里动名词短语作主语，故Knew---knowing。

7.考察定语从句关系代词。句意：有时，年轻人对那些买不起昂贵东西的人非常刻薄。此句中的定语从句，先行词others，需要用关系代词who/that指代先行词，并在定语从句中作主语，故which---who/that。

8.考查名词的数。这里”昂贵的东西”，用复数名词things。thing---things.

9.考查主谓一致。句意：并不是我们的衣服或者鞋子让我们有尊严。强调句型中主语not clothes or shoes，根据主谓一致原则，故动词用make。故makes--- make。

10.考查连词。句意：我们内心和心灵拥有的才是要紧的。根据句意可知our heart和our soul是并列关系，用and。故but---and。

【名师点睛】

would like的用法。would like意为"想要"，语气非常委婉。具体用法如下：

1.后接名词或代词，表示具体"要"某样东西。

例：I would like a cup of coffee.我要两杯咖啡。

He would like a large bowl of noodles.

My mother would like an apple.

2.后接动词不定式（就是to do形式），表示意愿、喜爱，常用于有礼貌地提出邀请、请求或建议。

例：I would like to help you.我愿意帮你。

She'd like to eat swim.

3. would like sb. to do sth.想要某人做某事。

例：I'd like you to meet them.我想要你见他们。

I'd like him to do my homework.

4. Would you like...? 你（们）想要…吗？表示向对方提出客气的、有礼貌的请求、邀请、希望或询问等。

例：Would you like an apple? 你想要个苹果吗？

注意：它的肯定回答多用Yes, please./Yes, I'd (We'd) like (love) to./Certainly./Yes, thank you.等；否定回答常用No, thanks. /No, thank you.等。

例：-Would you like to drink some tea? 你要喝茶吗？-Yes, thank you.是的，谢谢。

-Would you like some coffee? 你要点儿咖啡吗？-No, thanks.不要了，谢谢。