Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

There are bound to be question marks over our future, so we often think of future. We often wonder that the world will like a hundred years’ time.

Think of space. Perhaps a permanent station on the moon will have been set up. Perhaps people will be able to visit the moon as tourist. Cheap rockets for space travel will have been developed, permitted long journeys through the solar system. When that time come, people will be taking holidays in space and visiting another planets. Great progress will have been made in medicine, too.

Pollution have been controlled in a hundred years’ time.

All the world will have been developed—even Antarctica. We will have used up many of the earth’s land to build our cities, therefore floating the cities will have been built. The Japanese have already plans in this kind. And there will be cities under the sea.

Answer

【解析】1.that改为what。

考查名词从句。我们想知道一百年后这个世界会变成什么样子。Like 后缺宾语，故用what。

【名师点睛】what和that引导名词性从句的区别

what和that均可引导名词性从句中的主语、表语、宾语从句，具体区别如下：

1. what 可在从句中用作主语、宾语或表语，意为“什么”或“所…的”，相当于“the thing(s) that…；all that…；that which…；everything that…不能省略。

1)Leave it with me and I'll see what I can do. (what引导宾语从句并作do的宾语)

= Leave it with me and I'll see the thing I can do

2)But wait till you see what we'll make for you to your own measure. (what引导宾语从句并在从句中作宾语)

.What 表示“所„„的(人)”意思，相当于“the person that„”等。例如：

3)He is not what he used to be.他已不是从前的他了。 (what引导表语从句并在从句中作表语)

4)What you say is quite right. 你所说的相当正确。

2. that也可引导主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句和同位语从句，但仅起连接作用，本身没有实际意义，在从句中也不充当任何句子成分(引导宾语从句时通常可以省略)。如：

1) I believe (that) he will come to see us. 我相信他会来看我们的。

若从句置于句子后面，代词it作形式主语。例如：

2 )It’s a pity (that) he didn’t finish college. 真遗憾他大学没毕业。

3) It made them sad that they couldn’t pass the driving test.

记住：在名词性从句中，只要作成分，就用what，不能用that。在定语从句中that是关系代词，做成分；what不能用于定语从句中。

2.will 后加be。

考查谓语动词。.宾语从句是what the world will like a hundred years time ，will后必须跟动词，而like是介词。故要加个be，构成谓语动词。

3.tourist改为tourists。

考查名词复数。也许人们可以作为游客游览月球。游客要用名词复数。故tourist 要加s 。

4.permitted 改为permitting.。

考查非谓语作状语。太空旅行的廉价火箭将被开发出来，允许在太阳系中长途旅行。“Cheap rockets for space travel will have been developed, permitting long journeys through the solar system.”= Cheap rockets for space travel will have been developed, which permits long journeys through the solar system。所以permit的逻辑主语是前面的句子，与permit是逻辑上的主动关系。故要用ing形式。

5.come改为comes。

考查谓语动词。Come的主语是that time，是单数，所以谓语动词要用comes。

6.another 改为other。

考查形容词。届时，人们将在太空度假，参观其他的星球。another 另一个，other其他的。

7.pollition 加will。

考查动词的时态。污染将在一百年内得到控制。将来完成进行时要用will have been done.所以要加will。

8.many改为most。

考查代词。……用光地球上的大部分土地…....。many许多的，most大多数的。根据内容可知是大多数的。

9.去掉the。

考查有无冠词。因此漂浮的城市将被建造。The 多余去掉。

10.in 改为of。

考查介词。日本人已经有这种计划了plan与this kind是一种所属关系，要用of。