Question

最近，某英语交流学习论坛提出一个话题“Should square dancing be forbidden?”邀请网友参与讨论。你打算参加，请根据题目写一篇发言稿。

内容包括：

1.广场舞的现状；

2.表明你的观点；

3.给出理由。

注意：词数100左右。

Should square dancing be forbidden?

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Answer

Should square dancing be forbidden?

In recent years, square dancing has been becoming increasingly popular in cities. Many people have a habit of dancing to music with others. However, the loud noise disturbs the people who live around the square. Should square dancing be forbidden?

I don’t think so. Here are the reasons. First of all, dancing is a good way to take exercise, which can help people to build themselves up. It also provides a chance for people to communicate with each other. Besides, the square is a good place for people to work out.

At the same time, the people living near the square have the right to live in peace. So I suggest the time when people dance on the square should be limited.

【解析】本文属于议论文写作，讨论对广场舞的看法。本文写作时首先要叙述广场舞的现状，接着要提出自己的观点，在表达观点后陈述理由时要使用一些连词来把支撑自己的观点的句子有机结合起来，这样说服力会更强。在陈述理由时要注意考虑到跳舞的人和居民两个方面。

【亮点说明】

在本文中使用了多种句式，单句和复句交替使用。如非限制性定语从句和宾语从句。能正确地使用非谓语成分，体现了作者对语言的驾驶能力。

文章开篇叙述广场舞现在的流行状况，接着使用转折连词However，表达了广场舞的扰民，完整陈述了广场舞的现状——越来越流行的同时也有扰民的问题。在阐明自己的观点时使用一系列连词（词组）如：first of all，和besides，at the same time等。使用非限制性定语从句dancing is a good way to take exercise，which can help people to build themselves up。再用so…引出了结论：广场舞的时间要有个限制。I suggest the time when people dance on the square should be limited。使用了宾语从句来表达自己的观点。

在本文中多次使用非谓语：dancing is a good way to take exercise非谓语作主语。在单句中It also provides a chance for people to communicate with each other使用了it作形式主语，动词不定式to communicate with each other是真正的主语。在句子the people living near the square have the right to live in peace中使用现在分词living near the square作the people的后置定语。

在范文中运用了一些常见的短语，如：popular in在．．．中受欢迎， have a habit of, a good way to take exercise，have the right to live in peace，at the same time.为文章添色不少。