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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有lO处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后酌词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Sunday, I accompanied two of my foreign friend, Tom and Mary, to travel around Beijing. We began with touring South Luogu Lane(南锣鼓巷) , which is known for their traditional Chinese architecture. I know a place very well so I acted as their tour guide ! For lunch, we had tried some Beijing fried sauce noodles(炸酱面). Tom in particular thought that they tasted deliciously. After lunch, we went to Houhai skate on the frozen lake. Mary was skating beautifully while Tom called for help. We finished the day with going shop, and both Tom and Mary bought some paper-cuts like souvenirs. It was a fantastic day but I hope they will come back again soon.

 

1. friend→friends 2. their→its 3. a→the 4. 去掉had 5. deliciously→delicious 6. 在skate前加to 7. while→when 8. shop→shopping 9. like→as 10. but→and/so 【解析】第一处:考查名词。two of+名词复数。故应将friend改为friends。 第二处:考查代词。句意:我们从参观南锣鼓巷开始,南锣鼓巷以其传统的中国建筑出名。its指South Luogu Lane’s。 第三处:考查冠词。the place特指South Luogu Lane。a泛指,the表特指。 第四处:考查时态。该句介绍的是发生在上个周日中午的行为,故该句应用一般过去时态。had多余,应去掉。 第五处:考查形容词。taste意为“尝起来”,是系动词,后面接形容词作表语。 第六处:考查非谓语动词。句意:吃过午饭,我们去Houhai去滑冰。to skate on the frozen lake表目的。 第七处:考查固定句式。句意:Mary正在优美地滑冰,这时突然Tom开始呼救。be doing when…意为“正在做某事这时突然……”,是固定句式。故把while改为when。 第八处:考查固定表达。go shopping意为“去购物”,故把shop改为shopping。 第九处:考查介词。like意为“像”,as意为“作为”。此处指Tom和Mary买了一些剪纸作为纪念品。 第十处:考查连词。句意:这是很美好的一天,所以我希望他们再来。前后两句之间是顺承关系,不是转折关系,故应将but改为and/so。  
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