Question

假设你叫李华，最近在淘宝网上购买了一双鞋子，但出现了一些问题。

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请给网站写一封投诉信，包括以下内容：

1.投诉内容：

	申购情况	实际情况
颜色	黑色	白色
号码	37	38
到货日期	4月10日	4月20日

2.要求：重新邮寄或退款；

3.询问：若寄回，谁承担邮资？

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Answer

Dear Sir,

I’m writing to complain about a pair of sneakers recently purchased from your website. What I ordered was a pair of black size-37 shoes but I received a pair of white size-38 shoes instead. Worse still, there was a ten-day delay in delivering my shoes, which should have been received on April 10.

For the above reasons, I demand either a new pair of black size-nine shoes be posted to me immediately or I should be given a full refund. Also, if I send back the wrong shoes, will your company pay for the postage?

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先要认真审题，假设你叫李华，最近在淘宝网上购买了一双鞋子，但出现了一些问题，请给网站写一封投诉信。其次要确定时态，描述购买鞋子的情况时，用一般过去时；表达自己合理的要求时，用一般现在时。然后要确定文章的结构，首先要写明自己写这封信的目的，然后对自己购买鞋子的情况进行描述，最后提出自己可以接受的解决办法。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如What I ordered was a pair of black size-37 shoes but I received a pair of white size-38 shoes instead.这里含有一个主语从句。Worse still, there was a ten-day delay in delivering my shoes, which should have been received on April 10. 这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。