我们的生活中处处充满着爱，有父母的爱，有老师的爱，有同学的爱，有朋友的爱……。请...

我们的生活中处处充满着爱，有父母的爱，有老师的爱，有同学的爱，有朋友的爱……。请以 “Love Around Me(我身边的爱)”为题，写一篇短文。内容要点如下：

爱你的人	爱的表现
父母	为你做早餐；送你上学……
老师	传授知识；照顾你……
同学	一起学习；和睦相处……
朋友	在网上交流；分享快乐与烦恼……

写作要求：1.根据表格提示父母的爱、老师的爱、同学的爱和朋友的爱都要写齐。

2.词数90词左右，不得出现真实姓名、校名。

参考词汇：receive love; get on...with; chat online。

Love Around Me

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Love Around Me There is lots of love around me in my everyday life.(文章开门见山，直入话题) Every day I can receive love from my parents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends.(本句是正文内容的总述，下文一次介绍了父母、老师、同学和朋友的爱，文章采用 “总—分—总”的模式叙述) In the morning, my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me. Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge. My dear classmates and I study together happily, getting on well with each other. I chat online with friends in my spare time. They often share my pleasure and trouble. I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. I make a decision to study hard and make great progress. Here, I should say to them. “Thank you for all your love.”(结尾处画龙点睛，抒发了爱给我带来的动力和愉快的生活）【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。我们的生活中处处充满着爱，有父母的爱，有老师的爱，有同学的爱，有朋友的爱……。请以 “Love Around Me(我身边的爱)”为题，写一篇短文。其次要确定时态，表示经常和反复发生的事情，所以用一般现在时。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge.用了not only…but also句型，意思是不仅……而且……I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. 这里含有一个时间状语从句。

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