Question

假如你是中学生李华，你市正在创建文明城市，请以“Changes I have Seen”为题发表演讲，呼吁大家为“创建文明城市”做贡献。

要点：

1.分享你看到的变化（如交通志愿者）；

2.你的呼吁。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增减细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：文明城市civilized city    行人pedestrian    闯红灯jump the red light

Good morning,everyone!

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Thank you for listening.

Answer

Good morning,everyone!

It's a great honor for me to talk about some changes.I’ve witnessed in the process of creating a civilized city. What has impressed me most us the traffic.We often saw pedestrians jump the red light.But now many volunteers stand at the crossroads,reminding the pedestrians to obey the traffic regulations.Of course,as educated citizens,we can do more to help our city to be more civilized,such as arousing the public’s traffic awareness and helping more people to become more self-disciplined.

Just as the saying goes,“Individuals together can make a difference.”I believe our city will become more civilized and harmonious through our joint efforts.So I’m here to appeal to everyone to do your bit for you city.Only in this way will our city take on a new look and become a better place to live in.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先，要审题，假如你是中学生李华，你市正在创建文明城市，请以“Changes I have Seen”为题发表演讲，呼吁大家为“创建文明城市”做贡献。

要点：1.分享你看到的变化（如交通志愿者）；2.你的呼吁。其次要确定时态，分享你看到的变化，需要和过去进行对比。表示现在的变化，用一般现在时，表示过去的情况，用一般过去时。你的呼吁，用一般将来时。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如What has impressed me most us the traffic.这里含有一个主语从句；I believe our city will become more civilized and harmonious through our joint efforts. 这里含有一个宾语从句。