Question

假定你是李华，你校正在开展“心怀感恩”教育活动。请你结合个人经历和下列要点，为校报的英语园地写一篇短文。

1、感动你的人和事。

2、表达感恩和祝福。

注意：1.词数100 左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.开头语已为你写好。

Looking back on the past years(回首过去的几年),______________________________________________

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Answer

(1) Looking back on the past years, I couldn’t help but think of Susan, my English teacher, 

who always encouraged me to get over any difficulty I encountered in high school.

As the exam was approaching, Susan had a talk with me when noticing my stress and 

anxiety. By analyzing my test grades she asked me to believe my ability and relax myself. 

Her advice made me full of confidence and courage. Every time I was down, Susan was 

always the first person who gave me great comfort. 

My gratitude to Susan is beyond words. Without her assistance, I can not imagine how

I can pass the life of high school smoothly. I wish her happiness and good luck in the future. 

(2) Looking back on the past years, I owe many thanks to many parents.

Blessed with my parents, I’ve been living a happy and worry-free life in the past 16 years. Therefore, I’d like to express my sincerest gratitude to my parents, who have brought me up not only to learn scientific knowledge but also to behave myself. Without their patient teaching and selfless devotion, I couldn’t have been growing up healthily.

Additionally, never shall I forget the time when my parents encouraged me when I was feeling down. Also, I will always cherish the precious time spent with my parents going on vacation, talking about life and discussing my learning problems. I feel deeply grateful to them.

May my parents have long and happy lives.

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先审题，假定你是李华，你校正在开展“心怀感恩”教育活动。请你结合个人经历和下列要点，为校报的英语园地写一篇短文。1、感动你的人和事。2、表达感恩和祝福。其次要确定时态，感动你的人和事，用一般过去时。表达感恩和祝福，用一般现在时和一般将来时。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如 I couldn’t help but think of Susan, my

 English teacher, who always encouraged me to get over any difficulty I encountered in high 

school. 这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。Every time I was down, Susan was 

always the first person who gave me great comfort. 这里含有一个定语从句。Therefore, I’d like to express my sincerest gratitude to my parents, who have brought me up not only to learn scientific knowledge but also to behave myself. 这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。