Question

假定你是李华，你校打算成立Fans英语俱乐部，想邀请外教Smith参加，请你给Smith写封邀请函，内容包括：

1.成立俱乐部的目的；

2.活动时间、地点及安排；

3.邀请加入。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer

Dear Smith,

I'm Li Hua,a student in Class 1 Grade 3.To arouse our interest in English learning and provide a platform for us to practice English,our grade has decided to set up Fans English Club.

We'll gather in the meeting room after school every Friday afternoon,when various activities will be organized and performed,like singing English songs and having debates in English.

I'm very honored to invite you to join us representing our grade.I hold the firm belief that your appearance in our club will certainly inspire us all to become more interested in English and therefore work harder at English.

Hoping to see you every Friday afternoon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：

本文要求给外教Smith老师写封邀请函，邀请他参加你校打算成立的Fans英语俱乐部。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。完整说明题干中给的内容，适当扩展。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目要求我们在邀请信中写出的内容以及我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：介绍自己以及成立俱乐部的目的（激发英语学习的兴趣，提供练习英语的平台）；第二段：活动时间、地点及安排（让被邀请人清楚的了解活动的基本信息。）；第三段：邀请Smith老师加入（您的出现能激励我们更努力的学习英语）。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：非限制性定语从句和将来时的被动语态We'll gather in the meeting room after school every Friday afternoon, when various activities will be organized and performed…；同位语从句的使用I hold the firm belief that your appearance in our club will certainly inspire us.……。2.使用了过渡词语：therefore 等。3.使用了重要短语：set up建立；be honored to感到很荣幸；become interested in对…感兴趣。