假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Harmony is very important to our society. All of us are looking forward to live in a harmonious society. As students, I thought we should first keep our dormitories with harmony. For one thing, it can create a good environment for my studies and life. For other, it can help us grow healthily. Unfortunately, there are some way to make our dormitories harmonious. Firstly, we should learn to understand each other and solve everything in the peace. Secondly, we should try to get rid our own bad habits. Lastly, we should share or get on with each other.
1.Strange _______ it might be,the suggestion he made is acceptable.
2.I was about to go to bed _________ there was a knock at the door.
3.It was not until the early 19th century ______ his musical gift was fully recognized.
4.By the time you get home I _______________ (clean)the house from top to bottom.
5.It suddenly ___________(occur) to me that I hadn’t locked my door.
6.The number of smokers, _______is reported,has dropped by 17 percent.
7.Opposite is St.Paul’s Church,___________ you can hear some lovely music.
8.After _____ seemed a hopeless wait,four coal miners trapped in the mine for 125 hours were finally rescued in HeiLongJiang Province.
9.As is known to us,it’s no use ___________(complain) without taking action.
10.George returned after the war, only __________(tell) that his wife had left him.
1.___________(strict) speaking, the book is not a novel, but a short story.
2.She shows little __________(appreciate) of good music.
3.The child was found _____________(abandon) but unharmed.
4.There were no ____________(survive).
5.When’s food? I’m ___________(starve).
6.In _____________(conclude), I would like to thank those who helped me.
7.The committee is ____________(compose) mainly of lawyers.
8.He came up close,____________(breathe) alcohol of fumes all over me.
9.There is a general __________(recognize) of the urgent need for reform.
10.She didn’t _______(participant) in the discussion.
11.She is one of the most ____________(influence) figures in local politics.
12.Fighting was _____________(concentrate) around the towns to the north.
13.His ________(argue) was that public spending must be reduced.
14.My bedroom was __________(situate) on the top floor of the house.
15.He’s very _________(experience) in looking after animals.
16.The clock has just __________(strike) three.
17.There were calls for her ___________(resign) from the board of directors.
18.It’s_______(freeze) cold outside,so please put on your coat.
19.Our new offices are still under ____________(construct).
20.As far as I’m ________(concern), it’s wise not to spend much time playing with smartphones.
In Hangzhou, borrowing books from the library is now as simple as shopping online: click, pay1. wait for delivery.
The city’s public library recently launched a program on WeChat, 2. popular Chinese messaging software, enabling its readers to check out books online and get them 3.(deliver) to their homes at low prices.
To enjoy the “Hangzhou enjoyable reading” service, one first needs to follow the library’s official WeChat account, 4. provides a list of books. After picking books, borrowers are required5. (present) the information such as their library membership cards, cell phone numbers and so on. The selected items will be delivered by express within three days after payments. Each reader can borrow up to 5 books once and 20 books at most 6. total. The books can be borrowed for up to 40 days. Readers now can borrow the library’s most popular books in this way. The online books will be renewed and enriched 7. (gradual) according to readers’ borrowing habits and8. (prefer). At the end of December, the library’s old and classic books 9.(put) online too, making the total number of books available and 10.(bring )borrowers a lot of convenience.
Many people argue that working can be a valuable experience for the young. However, working more than about 15 hours a week is ______ for teens because it reduces their involvement with school, and ______ a materialistic and expensive lifestyle.
Schoolwork and the benefits of extracurricular activities tend to be ______ when teens work long hours. As more and more teens have filled the many part-time jobs, teachers have faced increasing ______. They must both keep the attention of ______ pupils and give homework to students who simply don’t have time to do it. ______, educators have noticed less involvement in the extracurricular activities that many consider a ______ influence on young people. School bands and athletic teams are ______ players, and sports events are ______ attended by working students. Those teens who try to do it all may find themselves ______.
Another ______ of too much work is that it may promote materialism and an unrealistic lifestyle. Some parents say that working helps teach teens the ______ of a dollar. ______ that can be true. It’s also true that some teens work to help their family or to save for college.______, surveys have shown that a lot of working, teens use their earnings to buy luxuries. These young people won’t spend ______ —they can just about have it all. In many cases, they are getting used to a lifestyle they won’t be able to ______ several years down the road, when they no longer have parents ______ car insurance, food, and so on. At that point, they won’t have enough money to pay for necessities as well as luxuries.
Teenagers can ______ the benefits of work while avoiding its drawbacks, simply by _______ their work hours during the school year. As is often the case, a moderate (适度的) approach will be the most healthy and ______.
1.A. bad B. dull C. important D. useful
2.A. witnesses B. requires C. changes D. encourages
3.A. adopted B. forgotten C. disbelieved D. considered
4.A. demands B. threats C. difficulties D. expectations
5.A. tired B. naughty C. lazy D. weak
6.A. Above all B. In addition C. By contrast D. For example
7.A. healthy B. direct C. short D. bad
8.A. welcoming B. needing C. losing D. training
9.A. normally B. regularly C. actively D. poorly
10.A. exhausted B. energetic C. disappointed D. worried
11.A. side B. benefit C. drawback D. character
12.A. size B. cost C. value D. effect
13.A. Unfortunately B. Undoubtedly C. Unusually D. Unnecessarily
14.A. However B. Besides C. Instead D. Therefore
15.A. freely B. willingly C. wisely D. honestly
16.A. afford B. imagine C. face D. develop
17.A. looking for B. caring for C. working for D. paying for
18.A. enjoy B. learn C. share D. remember
19.A. ignoring B. limiting C. counting D. choosing
20.A. practical B. acceptable C. rewarding D. popular
Time for a Brainstorm
A brainstorm is a session where a small group of people come together to solve a problem．People voice spontaneous ideas, sometimes just shouting , and a note-taker writes them all down． 1.．By getting different ideas out there, ideas are said to bounce off each other and even can help solve the problem at hand．Brainstorming is often a group exercise but individuals can also conduct personal brainstorms．
2.He defined it as using the brain to storm a creative problem and do so in commando (突击队）fashion，with each stormer attacking the same objective．According to him,, it was easier to tone down a wild idea than think up a new one．He placed importance on the collection of as many ideas as possible and dismissed scientific thinking．
Brainstorming has become one of the most popular ways to solve problems and hold discussion in schools and businesses．Many students brainstorm for a group assignment or even for a personal essay． Sarah Grace, 24, is an Australian marketing analyst and uses brainstorming during all her creative duties． She thinks brainstorming is the best way to work as a team．The sessions get everyone on the same page，everyone moving together and with a clear understanding about the foundations of an event or idea．3.．
However, a big problem with brainstorming is creating a mess that leads people further away from a solution．4. If you don’t have a strong moderator or leader of the brainstorm, can go really off track，and people just start discussing something totally different． Brainstorming can sometimes confuse the human brain． 5. If you brainstorm too much and your page is filled up with all the messy links, you can paint yourself into a bit of comer and get trapped with ideas． You need to move past brainstorming as soon as you have something workable．
A．The ideas can be smart，strange or crazy．
B．It is caused by a lack of direction from a leader．
C．Brainstorming really helps her organize her thoughts．
D．Brainstorming really is the best way to build team spirit．
E．It can open too many doors and not suggest a clear direction．
F．Brainstorms were popularized in the 1940s by American advertising boss Alex Osborn．．
G．They can be words, phrases, paragraphs and anything that can help answer the question．
