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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A ),并在其下面写出该加的词。    s

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My dream was to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I have had the dream since my childhood. In my opinion, with teachers, no society could make progresses. There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children’ s growth. Not only teachers pass on knowledge to children, but we also teach children how to behave themselves. Comparing with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. And to me, what a great fun it is to be with children! They make me feel young forever so I' 11 study hard and try my best to realize my dream.

 

1. was改为is 2. with 改为without 3. progresses改为progress 4. whether改为that 5. Not only加上do 6. we 改为they 7. Comparing 改为Compared 8. hard改为harder或lower改成low 9. And改为But或Yet 10. a去掉 【解析】本文讲的是作者想要成为一名老师。因为作者认为没有老师社会就不会有进步。尽管跟其它工作比起来,当教师既辛苦又没钱,但作者最大的兴趣就是要和孩子们呆在一起。所以为了自己的梦想,作者现在就开始努力。 小题 1. 考查动词时态的用法。通篇是讲述事实,用一般现在时,故was改为is。 小题 2. 考查介词的用法。没有社会能进步,假如没有老师,表示否定,故with 改为without。 小题 3. 考查名词的单复数。progress是不可数名词,没有复数形式。故progresses改为progress 。 小题 4. 考查同位语从句中的引导词。doubt的句子中,如果主句是否定,后用whether引导从句,如果主句是肯定,则用that。故whether改为that 。 小题 5. 考查动词时态的用法。not only位于句首用部分倒装,通篇现在时用助动词与主语倒装,故 Not only加上do 。 小题 6. 考查代词时态的用法。根据前面的teachers得知这里指代他们,故we 改为they 。 小题 7. 考查分词做状语。如果动词与句子主语是主动关系,用现在分词做状语;如果是被动关系,则用过去分词。这里compare与teaching是被动关系,要用过去分词做状语。故Comparing 改为Compared 。 小题 8. 考查形容词比较级。这里是做比较,要用比较级。故hard改为harder或lower改成low。 小题 9. 考查连词辨析。与前句Comparing with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. And to me, what great fun it is to be with children与其它工作相比,当老师很辛苦又没钱,但对于我,我喜欢跟孩子们在一起。是转折关系,故And改为But或Yet。 小题 10. 考查冠词的用法。fun是不可数名词,前面不能用冠词,故a去掉。 【名师点睛】 本题难点解读: 1:从句位于抽象名词后,且从句中不缺少成分和翻译,用that引导,缺少作主语、宾语、表语的引导词时,根据上下文考虑使用what。 There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children’ s growth.考查同位语从句中的引导词。doubt的句子中,如果主句是否定,后用whether引导从句,如果主句是肯定,则用that。故whether改为that 。 2:句中已有谓语动词,如果动词与句子主语是主动关系,用现在分词做状语;如果是被动关系,说明需用非谓语动词的过去分词形式。 Comparing with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower.考查非谓语动词。如果动词与句子主语是主动关系,用现在分词做状语;如果是被动关系,则用过去分词。这里compare与teaching是被动关系,要用过去分词做状语。故Comparing 改为Compared 。  
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