假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。
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2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One of my happier days was hearing that I was admitted into a medical school. It has been a dream of me for as long as I can remember. My father played big role in my desire to become a physician. See him live a life of services to others inspired me from a young age. Watching him to put on his white coat with the stethoscope（听诊器）around his neck was liked looking at a superhero. Hearing him share stories of how medical care saved patients’ lives was enjoyable. As for me, medicine were the perfect mixture of wonder and science, that deeply attracted me.
Xinyang Mao Jian is a famous and ancient green tea produce in Xinyang, Henan Province. The name can be divided into two parts that are associated with two aspects: “Xinyang”, 1. first part, is the Xinyang city in Henan that produces this type of tea; “Mao Jian” are the words to describe the shape of the tea, 2. is small and needle like.
Xinyang has a tea history 3. (date) back to 2,300 years ago—in 1987, at Gushi County of Xinyang, tea 4. (discover) in an ancient tomb. In the past century, Xinyang Mao Jian has been considered one of the 5. (good) teas in China.
Located in southern Henan Province, Xinyang is a place 6. a mild climate and good conditions for growing trees that produce the tea’s unique quality: Xinyang tea trees are planted at high altitudes where the weather is 7. (clear) divided by four distinct seasons. Moreover, the location is abundant（丰富的）with forests, clouds, rainfall, and with large temperature 8. (different) between day and night. These geographical 9. (advantage) help keep Xinyang’s soil healthy and rich, while trees more efficiently（高效地）absorb chemicals 10. (produce) quality green tea.
Ken Jeong is more than an actor; he’s also a lifesaver. The 48-year-old person is best known for _______ crazy Spanish teacher Ben Chang on Community, an American comedy television series. Over the weekend, he proved he has got much more in common with his _______ from his Dr. Ken when he jumped into action to _______ a woman with a medical emergency.
Jeong _______ his career as a medical doctor and is now licensed（给予执照）as a physician（内科医生）in California, _______ does not practice medicine. He was _______ at the Stand Up Live club in Arizona, on _______ night when a woman in the audience _______ had a shock.
Jeong _______ the woman’s medical emergency and came down into the audience where he cleared ________ for the woman and attended to her as others ________ paramedics（护理人员）.
As he helped the ________, he received help from a member of the audience who happened to be a nurse. They ________ with the woman until an ambulance（救护车）arrived and she was ________ to the hospital. Following the incident, Jeong returned to the ________ where he was greeted with a round of applause（掌声）before he then finished his set.
Holmberg, who was in the ________ at the time, took to twitter to ________ her first experience. “A woman had a medical emergency during the ________. Ken jumped off the stage to assist. A nurse helped, too. Then on with the show! Great ________! I am thankful to have grown up in a country where people ________ each other”.
1.A. respecting B. playing C. disliking D. helping
2.A. staff B. partner C. character D. figure
3.A. bear B. save C. persuade D. recognize
4.A. ruined B. began C. continued D. loved
5.A. for B. so C. and D. but
6.A. performing B. relaxing C. chatting D. painting
7.A. Saturday B. Wednesday C. Tuesday D. Monday
8.A. immediately B. suddenly C. finally D. narrowly
9.A. was aware of B. was afraid of C. got tired of D. turned away from
10.A. doubt B. room C. soil D. mud
11.A. annoyed B. helped C. called D. blamed
12.A. woman B. doctor C. actress D. viewer
13.A. started B. lived C. went D. waited
14.A. rushed B. admitted C. invited D. introduced
15.A. dormitory B. club C. balcony D. stage
16.A. shelter B. distance C. audience D. journey
17.A. evaluate B. analyse C. share D. exchange
18.A. struggle B. show C. quiz D. challenge
19.A. morning B. dusk C. afternoon D. night
20.A. cared about B. communicated with C. discussed with D. relied on
In today’s world English has become a global language. Speaking or writing in English is a matter of global interest these days, for it is now a requirement for being able to communicate with the outer world. 1..
Enthusiasm（热情）
The first thing you need to have is an enthusiasm to reach your goal. The most important thing you have to have is emotional devotion（情感，承诺）with your desire to learn English quickly. 2..
3.
You pass by a lot of things in English that you meet with in your day-to-day life. Things could include magazines, emails, posts on social media, websites, a piece of literary work（文学作品）or a newspaper. Read them because you never know what is waiting for you in there. You might find that a lot of things are already known to you but the content will surely be full of new vocabulary allowing you to improve faster.
Keep a note of the new words
4.. It’s a bit more important that you keep a handy notebook with you and whenever you learn a new word or expression, write down the context along with the word. Use the word in a sentence and note the meaning, too. Sometimes you may find forgetting a certain word or phrase seems impossible. 5.. So, to prevent this you need to keep visiting your pages and go through the notes you have made time and time again.
A. Don’t just move on after reading
B. Read everything you may come across
C. Don’t let yourself down if you face a difficulty
D. However, being a human being you are built to forget
E. You won’t achieve success if you aren’t enthusiastic enough
F. By following these tips you will improve the language quickly
G. Spend the most of your time in either listening or reading in English
If all the food that’s thrown away in three American cities could be saved, it would provide 68 million meals for people who don’t have enough to eat, according to a recent study.
The researchers found that, in the cities they surveyed（调查）, more than a kilogram of edible food per person is wasted each week. Edible food is food you can eat. It doesn’t include things like apple cores（果核）, egg shells, or bones from meat. Fruits and vegetables were the most common edible foods found in the dustbin, followed by food leftover from meals. Eggs, bread and milk were also commonly thrown out.
The people taking part in the survey gave several reasons for throwing edible food away. Most said the food went off. Some said they weren’t interested in eating leftovers. A few said the food had passed the “Best Before” date printed on the label（标签）. When food is wasted—by families, restaurants or grocery stores—we are also wasting all of the resources that go into producing that food. That means we are wasting water, land, energy and labour, as well as the fuel needed to transport food.
A lot of food is wasted before it even reaches the grocery store（食品杂货商）. Some food is damaged while it is being transported from the farm to the stores. Fruits and vegetables that don’t look attractive enough don’t even get put onto the shelves because most people won’t buy them. Grocery stores, restaurants and hospitals also waste a large amount of food. The researchers suggest that grocery stores should donate any food that is still okay to eat to homeless shelters, instead of throwing it away. Prepared meals from hospitals or restaurants could also be donated to shelters.
1.What do we know about edible food from the second paragraph?
A. Fruits are the most common. B. Some has been wasted.
C. It weighs over a kilogram. D. Bone is also edible food.
2.What is the major reason why the edible food is thrown away?
A. It has gone bad. B. People prefer other food.
C. It is not their favorite. D. The date hasn’t been printed.
3.What do the researchers advise grocery stores to do?
A. Help people in need. B. Beautify any food.
C. Discount fine food. D. Throw away outdated food.
4.Which of the following is probably the best title of the passage?
A. How Much Food do You Buy? B. How Much Food do You Eat?
C. How Much Food do You Waste? D. How Much Food do You Need?
My first week in the United States was a cultural shock. Everything felt new to me, including the style of conversation, the community I lived in and even the type of food people ate.
In our community back home, people eat mutton and chicken. Pork and beef are also common among other communities, but eating beef is taken as an illegal act. Unlike Nepal, eating beef is common in the West where most of the people follow religions other than Hinduism.
Food is just an example. When people move from one part of the world to another, they should adapt（适应）themselves to the new culture. For example, going to the bars or getting drunk is not acceptable in my community, but it is common in the US after a certain age.
I was raised in a traditional Hindu family in Nepal. We have a conservative（保守的，谨慎的）opinion towards marriage. Arranged marriages（包办婚姻）are common in which families decide whether the two should get married. Free love marriages are not allowed and are seldom seen. Same-sex marriage is also considered impossible.
To me, culture is a matter of habit. The culture is so deep-rooted in people’s minds that most people are against changes. It is always easy for them to do what they have been doing throughout their life. It may be difficult for anyone to adapt to a new culture.
However, with travel being an unavoidable thing for modern people, one always comes across different cultures. In such cases, one should be respectful and adaptive to the culture other people follow. The world is always a better place to live in when we have spaces for people of all cultures.
1.What does the Nepal law forbid people to eat?
A. Pork. B. Beef. C. Chicken. D. Mutton.
2.What can we learn from the passage?
A. Most westerners believe in Hinduism. B. Getting drunk in Nepal is acceptable.
C. Anyone can enter the bars in the US. D. The writer came across a cultural shock.
3.Which may be seen most in Nepal?
A. Open marriages. B. Free love marriages.
C. Same-sex marriage. D. Arranged marriages.
4.What is the writer’s attitude to different cultures?
A. Negative. B. Respectful. C. Conservative. D. Indifferent.
