Question

享有国际声誉的伟大科学家霍金Stephen Hawking不幸去世。请根据以下提示对他进行简要介绍，100词左右。

1. 1942年1月8日出生于英国，他从小对科学感兴趣；

2. 他毕业于牛津大学(Oxford University)，在剑桥大学(University of Cambridge)获得博士学位并留校做教学研究工作；

3. 他有很多著作，其中包括《时间简史》 (A Brief History of Time)，《果壳中的宇宙》(The Universe in a Nutshell)，《大设计》(The Grand Design)；

4. 他曾三次来访中国并做了科学报告和演讲；

5. 他是一位优秀的人，他的勇气、才华、幽默鼓舞了全世界人民。

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Answer

Stephen Hawking is one of the greatest scientists with international fame. He was born on January 8,1942 in the UK. Stephen Hawking showed great interest in science as a child. He graduated from Oxford University, and got his doctor degree in the University of Cambridge, where he worked as a professor and did some research, making great achievements.

He published many books, among which A Brief History of Time. The Universe in a Nutshell, The Grand Design are very famous. He ever visited China for three times and gave some science reports and speeches in different cities.

Stephen Hawking is an outstanding man, whose courage, talent and humour inspire the people all over the world.

【解析】

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