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假定你是李华,你校英语俱乐部将于下周举办“中国梦、学子行(Living my C...

假定你是李华,你校英语俱乐部将于下周举办中国梦、学子行(Living my Chinese dream as a student)”主题演讲活动。请你给你校外教Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件,请他对你的演讲稿提出修改建议。

注意:1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

2. 词数100左右。

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

 

Dear Mr. Smith, How are you doing? I’m Li Hua, one of your Chinese students. As is scheduled, our school’s English club will hold its annual speech contest next Friday. I’m writing to see if you can do me a favor by giving some advice on how I should improve my speech. The theme of the contest is “Living my Chinese dream as a student”. Although I have finished a draft of my speech, I am not satisfied with it. So I am sending the draft to you in this e-mail, expecting your expert advice as a teacher and native English speaker. I’ll be grateful if you could help. Looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。 第一步:根据提示可知,学校英语俱乐部将于下周举办“中国梦、学子行(Living my Chinese dream as a student)”主题演讲活动。请给你校外教Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件,请他对你的演讲稿提出修改建议。 第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词、短语和句子:As is scheduled, annual speech contest ,I’m writing to see if you can do me a favor by giving some advice……, finished a draft ,expert advice, I’ll be grateful if you could help.等。 第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,本文时态应以现在时为主,人称为第一人称。 第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【亮点说明】 范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如宾语从句if you can do me a favor by giving some advice on how I should improve my speech.非谓语动词expecting your expert advice as a teacher and native English speaker.全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。  
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