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假如你是高二学生李华,得知你的美国笔友PeterHarvard(哈佛大学)录取,请你给他写一封电子邮件。要点如下:

1.表示祝贺且备受鼓舞;

2.介绍自己目前的学习情况;

3.请教学习方法。

注意:1. 词数100左右;

2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总数;

3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

I have received your e-mail.

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Dear Peter, I have received your e-mail. I am very excited and inspired by the good news that you have been admitted into Harvard. First I’d like to offer my congratulations to you on your great success and I also hope to enter a famous university just like you. Now I want to tell you something about myself. As you know, I’m busy preparing for the Mid-term Examination. Day after day I work very hard and have to stay up late doing piles of papers. However, I’m always feeling stressed out because my efforts don’t seem to pay off, which makes me frustrated and exhausted. Will you be kind enough to give me some advice? I would appreciate it if you could write back to me as soon as possible. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 本文是一篇提纲类书面表达,要求考生把自己当成李华,得知你的美国笔友Peter被Harvard(哈佛大学)录取,请你给他写一封电子邮件。全文以一般过去时为主,使用一二人称。 第1步:审题。根据提示可知本文是一封电子邮件,给Peter写信表示祝贺并请教学习方法。全文以一般过去时为主,使用一二人称。 第2步:组织要点。表示祝贺且备受鼓舞;介绍自己目前的学习情况;请教学习方法。 第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 本篇范文结构完美,条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确,涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点,且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构,整篇文章富有变化,并不死板。尽量运用了高级的语法结构,如定语从句I’m always feeling stressed out because my efforts don’t seem to pay off, which makes me frustrated and exhausted. 固定句型I would appreciate it if you could…..。这些高级语法结构的运用提升了文章的层次,显示了很强的驾驭语言的能力。  
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