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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Smartphone apps certainly make our life easier. Currently, it look as if they can even help us with our homework. A wide various of study aid apps aimed at students have been released. Most of these apps allow users to take a photo of our schoolwork and the correct answers will just appear on our smartphones. Convenient although they are, these apps present problems with both parents and teachers. Most students just copy the answers from the apps, while only a few use the apps to study. Better still, some students even use the study aid apps as social networks. Therefore, we are not making the suggestion that study aid apps should completely banned. Parents and teachers should give necessary guidance to help students to take the advantage of the study aid apps’ strengths and avoiding their weaknesses.

 

第一句 look改成looks 第二句 various改成variety 第三句 our改成their 第四句 although改成as/though;with改成to 第六句 Better改成Worse 第七句 Therefore改成However;should后面加上be 第八句 去掉take the 中的the,avoiding改成avoid 【解析】 本文属于议论文,介绍收集软件给我们带来了方便,但是在辅导作业方面给学生作弊带来了弊端,因此建议家长和老师要指导学生用好作业辅导的软件。 第一处:考查动词时态。句意:现在,手机软件好像能够帮助我们做作业。本句为句型it looks as if,it为形式主语,为单数,故look要用第三人称单数,故改为looks。 第二处:考查固定搭配。句意:近年来,发布了各种各样针对学生的学习应用软件。固定搭配a variety of各种各样的,故将various改为variety。 第三处:考查代词。句意:这些应用程序中的大多数都允许用户拍摄他们的作业照片,而正确的答案将会出现在他们的智能手机上。应该是 “他们的”用代词their,故将our改为their。 第四处:考查连词。句意:尽管很方便,但它们给家长和老师都带来了问题。分析句子可知,本句的语序是特殊语序,而只有as/though做尽管的时候,需用特殊语序,形成表语/动词+as/though+主语+动词+状语的结构,故改为as或者though。 第五处:考查介词。句意:但它们给家长和老师都带来了问题。present something to somebody把……呈现给某人。 第六处:考查形容词。句意:更糟糕的是,一些学生甚至将学习应用软件作为社交网络。更糟糕的worse,故将Better改为Worse。 第七处:考查副词。句意:然而,这并不是说学习应用软件应该完全禁止。然而however,表示转折,故将Therefore改为However。 第八处:考查动词。句意:然而,这并不是说学习应用软件应该完全禁止。分析句子可知,that study aid apps should completely banned.为同位语从句,具体解释说明suggestion,从句中缺乏谓语be动词,与banned构成被动语态,故加be。 第九处:考查介词。句意:家长和老师应该提供必要的指导,帮助学生利用学习应用软件的优势,避免他们的缺点。本句为固定短语take advantage of利用,故去掉the。 第十处:考查动词。句意:家长和老师应该提供必要的指导,帮助学生利用学习应用软件的优势,避免他们的缺点。and连接连个并列成分take advantage of和avoid都作help to的宾语,故将avoiding改为avoid。  
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5.In order to overcome a bad first impression,your words and actions in the time to come must be consistently good.With enough time and patience,gaining trust and changing wrong beliefs is possible.

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G.Be mindful of your surroundings and sensitive in what you say to others.

 

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A. the new trend of slow reading    B. the decline of electronic devices

C. the importance of exchanging ideas    D. the increasing number of club readers

2.According to Patrick Kingsley, people are stupider partly because of_____________.

A. a non-stop reading pattern    B. the straight, left-to-right screen

C. a wide range of interesting news    D. the lack of reflection

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C. provides people with a quiet environment

D. cures the memory loss of elderly people

4.What’s the best title for the passage?

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