Question

假如你是班长李华，今年刚上高二。最近你发现班里的同学为了提高成绩经常熬夜，不注意饮食等问题。针对这些现象，请你给某英语报社写信投稿说明以上情况。并谈谈自己的看法。

注意:1.词数:100词左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Editor,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Editor,

I am a high school student who just entered Senior Two.

Recently, I have found that some of the students in our class study harder than before. They study late into night, eating snacks and drinking Coca-Cola, which is bad for their health. In the morning, due to staying up late, some students have to go to school hurriedly without breakfast, which surely does harm to their health.

In my opinion, though we are under the heavy pressure of study, we should try to eat properly and get as much exercise as possible. Only in this way can we keep fit and study will.

【解析】

本题是提纲类作文，文体是说明文。

话题是最近你发现班里的同学为了提高成绩经常熬夜，不注意饮食等问题。针对这些现象，请你给某英语报社写信投稿说明以上情况。并谈谈自己的看法。写作要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文；同时可以选择高级的词汇和语法项目，让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇。和固定短语准确表述。

文中使用了由which引导的非限制性定语从句They study late into night, eating snacks and drinking Coca-Cola, which is bad for their health. 运用了only引导的倒装句Only in this way can we keep fit and study will.较高级词汇due to，do harm to，as much exercise as possible也为文章增色不少。