Question

假如你是李华。你看到美国留学生Daisy 在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高中文水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电于邮件。

1表达给她提供帮助的意愿；

2.给出提高中文的建议；

3.表达你希望互相帮助，共同进步的愿望。

注意：1．内容包括所有要点, 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2．词数不少于100个词，开头语已为你写好；

Hi Daisy,

This is Li Hua. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Chinese.  ______________________

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Li Hua

Answer

Hi Daisy,

This is Li Lua. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Chinese. I am quite interested in it. I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Chinese.

Learning Chinese takes time, so if you want to learn it well, you should spend much time practicing it every day. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese, see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.

In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Chinese, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.

Hope for you early reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；美国留学生Daisy 在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高中文水平，她可以教英语作为回报，请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电于邮件。人称应为第一、第二人称，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：improve your Chinese（提高你的中文水平），help you learn Chinese（帮助你学习汉语），spend much time practicing（花时间练习），make great progress（取得巨大进步）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。