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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The charity shop around the corner has a few volunteers. They’re some locals who can’t find jobs or have learning or other difficulty. As I know how important it is of them to feel respected and appreciated, I took the time to talk to them.

Yesterday, it came to his notice that one of them had the sadness in his eyes. Approached him I thanked him for his work here. In spite of his condition he was respectfully. I stayed for a while and we talked a lot. They were clearly happy be noticed. I have no idea that their stories are and what they may be going through, yet I hope this little bit of kindness helped them.

 

第一处:difficulty改为difficulties; 第二处:of改为for; 第三处:took改为take 第四处:his改为my 第五处:删除the 第六处:Approached改为Approaching 第七处:here改为there 第八处:respectfully改为respectful 第九处:happy后加to 第十处:that改为what。 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,慈善商店都是由暂时找不到工作或有其他困难的志愿者负责管理的,他们渴望得到尊敬和欣赏。当某一个志愿者难过的时候,作者主动与他交流并安慰他。 第一处:考查名词。句意:他们都是当地人,要么是找不到工作或者有其他方面的困难。本句中名词difficulty具体化为可数名词指“一件困难的事情”,根据句意要使用复数形式。所以要把difficulty改为difficulties。 第二处:考查介词。句意:因为我知道对他们来说感觉被尊重被欣赏十分重要,我花时间和他们交流。本句考查不定式复合结构,因为important不是表示性格的名词,要使用for sb to do sth,要把of改为for。 第三处:考查时态。本文是一篇记叙文,本段介绍附近慈善商店的有关事情,都以一般现在时为主,所以要把took改为take。 第四处:考查代词。句意:昨天我注意到他们中有一个人眼里有悲伤的色彩。根据上下文可知是我注意到这点。所以要把his改为my。 第五处:考查冠词。句意:昨天我注意到他们中有一个人眼里有悲伤的色彩。根据上下文可知是我注意到这点。句中名词sadness是抽象名词,前面不要使用冠词,要单独使用。所以要删除定冠词the。 第六处:考查非谓语动词。句意:走近他的身边,我感谢他在那里的工作。动词approach与主语I构成主动关系,要用现在分词做状语。所以要把Approached改为Approaching。 第七处:考查副词。句意:走近他的身边,我感谢他在那里的工作。副词there指the charity shop,所以要把here改为there。 第八处:考查形容词。在英语里副词通常做状语修饰形容词、副词、动词或整个句子;而形容词通常做定语修饰名词代词。本句中应该使用形容词与系动词构成系表结构,所以要填respectful。 第九处:考查不定式。句意:因为被注意到他们非常高兴。句中不定式做原因状语,类似的结构还有Nice to meet you. 所以要在happy后加to。 第十处:考查同位语从句。句意:我不知道他们的故事,也不知道他们会经历什么。句中what their stories are是同位语从句,解释名词idea的内容,what和are构成系表结构;that在同位语从句中不做成分,所以要把that改为what。
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He 6.(thoughtful)included a “card-making” station he had set up with markers and construction paper to help each of his parents to privately create loving anniversary cards 7.   each other. He also recreated the special moments from our wedding day, with music he 8.(select)beforehand and foods and drinks.

He had also spent all week before the anniversary making paper hearts. He then 9.(ask)me to string them all over the house on the morning of the anniversary, so that he and I could surprise his dad/my husband with all the love. It was such a kind gesture for a little boy to think of. I left the whole thing in his little hands, 10. turned out beautiful! He told me he wanted to make an “unforgettable” day for his parents.

 

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My road to change, from that point on, went from a(n)______ to a neat and orderly highway, and I started changing rapidly.

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At the end, my weakness of being socially incompetent for so long became my ______ as it taught me how to change, as I now fight to become far better than the ______, and the absolute best I can be.

1.A. unconfident    B. dissatisfied    C. surprised    D. thoughtful

2.A. missed    B. jumped    C. polished    D. struck

3.A. account for    B. apply for    C. stick to    D. see to

4.A. produced    B. brought    C. exposed    D. introduced

5.A. failure    B. adventure    C. experience    D. connection

6.A. organization    B. instruction    C. idea    D. event

7.A. gather    B. observe    C. attract    D. balance

8.A. offering    B. liberating    C. blinding    D. confusing

9.A. impatiently    B. hopefully    C. potentially    D. cheerfully

10.A. temporary    B. comfortable    C. limited    D. random

11.A. accelerating    B. disappearing    C. removing    D. convincing

12.A. fears    B. urges    C. appointment    D. anger

13.A. chance    B. order    C. moment    D. mess

14.A. treating    B. witnessing    C. greeting    D. remembering

15.A. occasions    B. questions    C. purposes    D. promises

16.A. sense    B. notes    C. fun    D. knowledge

17.A. progress    B. promote    C. complain    D. research

18.A. example    B. discovery    C. stop    D. information

19.A. feeling    B. height    C. contribution    D. strength

20.A. typical    B. average    C. extra    D. precious

 

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The golden rule is to keep your job hunt separate from your current work. Don’t look for jobs while you’re working, and never use a work computer to search job listings. 2.

When you go on job interviews, your potential employer will ask why you’re looking to leave your current job. 3. Always answer positively, even if the truth is negative.

Great a networking tool as social media is, NEVER post that you’re looking for a job on Facebook or any other social media accounts. 4. You don’t want to start any rumors(传言)that you’re searching for a job, and you definitely don’t want anyone, especially your boss, to find out from someone else, especially from your social media account.

5. It presents an opportunity for you and your boss to have a frank discussion about what could make the job a better fit for you. Maybe you’ll end up getting the advancement or salary increase or other career path that would make you want to stay.

A. It can also help your job search, saving precious time.

B. If your current employer talks to you about it, be honest.

C. This is not the time to complain about your boss or the company.

D. Otherwise, this message will find its way to people from your office.

E. Try not to connect with anyone from work if you’re looking for another job.

F. It’s likely that you’re lonely because you don’t like your boss and coworkers.

G. You see, your work computer belongs to the company, and they have access to everything on it.

 

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The new method was developed by researchers at the University of Oxford in England. A report on their study was published in the medical journal The Lancet. Also taking part in the study were teams from Germany and the US.

Most heart attacks result from a build-up of fatty tissue inside arteries(动脉)that carry blood from the heart to other areas of the body, thus blocking this flow of blood and causing a heart attack.

Currently, doctors use CT scans to learn when a sticky substance called plaque has already built up inside an artery. The new technology is designed to predict which arteries are at risk for future buildup.

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Charalambos, a professor at Oxford University, said he believes the research shows this method could be very effective in getting patients to take early steps to prevent future problems, adding that researchers had yet to estimate exactly how many heart attacks could be prevented. But he said he believes the technique could help identify between 20 to 30 percent of people at risk of having one.

He added that the new technology will make such predictions easier because it works together with existing CT technology. The research was based on two large, independent studies of 4,000 patients in Germany, and the US. A company with ties to Oxford University is developing a service to examine CT scans of patients around the world, Reuters reported.

1.What’s the aim of the new technology?

A. To predict ways to block fatty issues in heart arteries.

B. To provide detailed pictures of how arteries work.

C. To build computer models of the image of a heart.

D. To decide which arteries are likely to have fat built up.

2.When does a heart attack generally happen according to the text?

A. When the CT scan affects the flow of blood in the heart.

B. When fat around heart arteries blocks the flow of blood.

C. When a sticky material flows into an artery near the heart.

D. When bones and organs of the body begin to be weak.

3.What is an early warning for heart attacks?

A. A change of fat happening around heart arteries.

B. The finding of a sticky material in the blood.

C. The presence of fat around the bones and organs.

D. The aging and failure of arteries near the heart.

4.What’s the main idea of the text?

A. The harm of fat build-up to heart arteries.

B. The use of CT scans to prevent of heart attacks.

C. Research into the early warning of heart attacks.

D. The warning the body gives about heart attacks.

 

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Now, some conscientious consumers are taking matters into their own hands and joining the Repair Café movement. Founded in Amsterdam in 2009 by sewing expert Martine Postma, the original nonprofit has expanded to more than 1,500 locations worldwide. These pop-up events, which are run by volunteers, offer lessons in how to fix anything from fixing a button to an unresponsive laptop.

“There’s juice and treats and you get to meet new people,” says Bennett, a retired civil servant and volunteer fixer at the Repair Cafe Toronto, where she mends jewellery. She brings her own specialized tools but says most items could be repaired by anyone with a pair of pliers and some determination. “Something that is broken took time and resources to make, so if you’re throwing it out, you’re wasting those resources. ”

If you can’t find a Repair Cafe near you, it’s easy to start one. RepairCafe. org offers a starter manual with step-by-step instructions.

Changing how we acquire things is necessary, but there’s also something to be said for simply not getting them in the first place. “Most of us have more than what we need,” says Marina. “This can lead to a lot of anxiety, like—think about everything packed in the back of your closet; do you own those things or do they own you?” She suggests we train ourselves to make mindful purchases.

Lazarovic, whose delayed purchase went even further, explains that less shopping has freed up more time for family activities, dinner with friends and making art. By doing so, as she puts it, “I got out of that need-to-buy-it craze and in the end I feel good that I’ve made something.”

1.How would people raised in the 1940s deal with broken home appliances?

A. Sell them at a lower price.    B. Press the button to find the fault.

C. Repair them to last longer.    D. Donate them to recycling stations.

2.What does Bennett say about her work?

A. She likes the good food people bring for her work.

B. Helping make repairs means saving resources.

C. She will set up her own Repair Cafe soon.

D. She learned to repair jewels after she retired.

3.Which of the following best explains “conscientious” underlined in Paragraph 2?

A. Responsible.    B. Generous.

C. Powerful.    D. Irreplaceable.

4.What good does Lazarovic think less shopping will do to us?

A. It’ll make us less anxious about used things at home.

B. It’ll force us to make donations of unwanted things.

C. It’ll lead us to explore the world more responsibly.

D. It will provide us more time for beneficial events.

 

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