Question

近来，学生普遍反映食堂饭菜单调，并且价钱昂贵，学校应该开放校外饭店，让学生能自主选择就餐。有些表示赞同，有些表示质疑。听取了同学们的心声后谈谈你自己的看法。

内容包含：

1.学生对食堂的反应；

2.学校的观点；

3.你自己的观点。

注意：1.字数80字左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer

Recently, a heated discussion is being held in our school campus. Students and the school hold the different opinions about it.

Some students reflect that the food in the canteen is of poor quality and there are less and less kinds of food which can not satisfy all the students’ tastes. In addition, the canteen workers seem to make more money by adding the food price. Students keep complaining about it but the school just ignores it. Therefore, students prefer to eat out.

The school holds the view that for one thing, the food safety outside can’t be guaranteed, and for another, students may save some time as well as money if they choose to eat in the school. The school says that they are always putting students’ safety and health at the first place. Now the canteen workers are devoted to making some changes.

In my opinion, students might as well give the school more time to take some proper and concrete measures. Only by strengthening its management and improving the service can the canteen be to all students’ tastes.

【解析】

本文是一篇开放类书面表达，学生普遍反映食堂饭菜单调，并且价钱昂贵，学校应该开放校外饭店，让学生能自主选择就餐。有些表示赞同，有些表示质疑。要求考生写出听取了同学们的心声后自己的看法。需要考生写出校方及考生自己的观点，总体难度较大。

第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一篇议论文，学生反映食堂饭菜一般，建议学校开放校外饭店。要求考生写出校方及考生自己的观点。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。

第2步：组织要点。1．近来，学生普遍反映食堂饭菜单调，并且价钱昂贵，学校应该开放校外饭店，让学生能自主选择就餐。2．校方观点：校外饭店无法确保食品安全；校内用餐可以节约时间和金钱；食堂承诺做出改变。3.考生观点：学生应该给学校更多时间采取适当措施整改食堂，食堂要加强管理提高服务。

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为hold the different opinions about、reflect、

of poor quality、satisfy、keep complaining、guarantee、be devoted to、take some proper and concrete measures等。写作时注意议论文的格式和惯用语。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。