满分5 > 高中英语试题 >

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有...

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As we all know, everyone has a dream. When I entered the primary school, it was the first time that I have dreamed of becoming a doctor. Nowadays with modern life developing rapid, many people suffer in different kinds of diseases, both mentally and physically. Therefore, my dream is to become a successful doctor, saved many people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor is very difficult, but I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To let my dream coming true, I have told myself over and over again that I'll get along well my study. After all, by working hardly, one can have no trouble make progress.

 

have 改为had; rapid改为rapidly; in改为from; saved改为saving 删掉but; health 改为healthy; coming改为come; well 后添加with hardly 改为hard make改为making 【解析】 本文为介绍说明文。文章介绍了自己的梦想及实现自己梦想的决心和计划。 第一处:考查时态。句型:It was the first time that…“这是某人第一次做某事”,that从句要求使用过去完成时。故have改为had。 第二处:考查副词。此处修饰动词developing,应使用副词形式。故rapid改为rapidly。 第三处:考查介词。固定词组:suffer from“患……病”。故in改为from。 第四处:考查非谓语动词。save与主语构成逻辑主动关系,应使用现在分词。故saved改为saving。 第五处:考查连词。让步状语连词although不能与连词but/and/or共同使用。故删掉but。 第六处:考查形容词。词组:keep sb./sth. adj.“使某人/某物保持某种状态”,此处为“让每个人保持健康”,应使用形容词形式。故health改为healthy。 第七处:考查固定搭配。固定搭配:let sb. do sth.“让某人做某事”。故coming改为come。 第八处:考查介词。固定短语:get along with“和……相处,取得进展”。故well后添加with。 第九处:考查副词。hardly“几乎不”,hard“努力地”,此处为“努力学习”。故hardly改为hard。 第十处:考查非谓语动词。固定搭配:have trouble (in) doing sth.“做某事有困难”。故make改为making。  
复制答案
考点分析:
相关试题推荐

阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。

It is in your daily life1.you always get into a situation where your parents control hundreds of things for you when you are a kid, such as the clothes you wear, the food you eat, where you go and whatever can keep you 2.(spellbind). It is a good thing. Kids need this kind of protection and help because they are not old enough to take care of  3.(they) and make decisions 4.(correct). But with you growing older, the part of being a teen is developing your own identity, 5.is different from your parents’. Different attitudes towards events like partying may lead to arguments, because your parents will always 6.(concern) about you and keep you safe, no matter how old you are. As a result, your parents feel 7. hard to get used to the new situation without 8.(know) your latest news. What kids should keep in mind is that in most cases, your parents can understand what you are going 9.because they 10. (be) teens once.

 

查看答案

From the time I lined up my dolls on the sofa in playschool, I wanted to be a teacher. “Open your books.” I would _____ my teddy bear and dolls. Then I would ______ teach them whatever new things I had just ____ at school.

For me, dream was one thing, and ______ was quite another. My family was too poor to ______ my further education. Finally, with others’ help, I attended a state university. However, I ______ needed more money to pay for my other expenses, so I found a part-time job, ______ test tubes in the science department. At then I believed that every dirty test tube I washed meant I was one step closer to my _______.

When working as a substitute (代替) teacher in the local area, I learned they were planning to _______the biology teacher I had substituted for. I was sure the _______was meant for me. However, the headmaster said, “You’re too ______. This last teacher had a lot of discipline problems because of his age. We want someone older -- with more ______.”

I cried all the way to work, disappointed and _______. Suddenly, a stranger who I met by chance asked me what had happened. I told him how much I wanted to _______and how sad I was ______ because of my age. Then I also shared some of my thoughts with him. He _______ me, “Never lose heart. I believe you can make it.” The next morning my phone rang. It was the headmaster calling to offer me the _______position. I was very ______ and asked him why. He explained, “You made quite an impression on the chairman of our Board of Directors. He ______ that you should have this position.” A few weeks later, I stood by the door of my classroom, welcoming my ______ on their first day of school. When they were settled, I said with a smile, “Open your books.”

1.A. persuade    B. command    C. calm    D. congratulate

2.A. angrily    B. sorrowfully    C. happily    D. disappointedly

3.A. found    B. changed    C. requested    D. learned

4.A. advice    B. interest    C. schooling    D. time

5.A. continue    B. ignore    C. forget    D. enjoy

6.A. almost    B. suddenly    C. hardly    D. still

7.A. decorating    B. cleaning    C. collecting    D. producing

8.A. house    B. job    C. dream    D. school

9.A. punish    B. replace    C. praise    D. accept

10.A. result    B. scholarship    C. experiment    D. job

11.A. young    B. impatient    C. busy    D. strange

12.A. adventure    B. confidence    C. experience    D. independence

13.A. tired    B. comfortable    C. nervous    D. upset

14.A. travel    B. teach    C. study    D. sing

15.A. depended on    B. looked after    C. turned down    D. cared about

16.A. comforted    B. ordered    C. thanked    D. promised

17.A. Chinese    B. math    C. English    D. biology

18.A. surprised    B. sad    C. anxious    D. selfish

19.A. suggested    B. informed    C. complained    D. regretted

20.A. parents    B. students    C. teachers    D. friends

 

查看答案

A great number of people can get injured or even killed resulting from a human stampede (踩踏).The bad thing is that a peaceful group of people can quickly become concerned and panicked(恐慌). 1.. If you are in a crowd, the most important thing is to make yourself familiar with your surroundings and mentally notice the exits. No matter where you are, make sure you always know how to get out. 2.. If you are in a crowd of moving people, wet ground can be slippery or dangerous, causing you to fall.

Be aware of the general atmosphere of the event, as panic situations can often be expected. When in danger, a few seconds can make all the difference. If you find yourself in the middle of a moving crowd, do not fight against the pressure, do not stand still or sit down. 3.. Take advantage of any space that may open up and try to move sideways to the crowd movement where the flow is weaker.

4..—It gives you movement and protects your chest.

If you fall, get up quickly. If you fall and cannot get up, keep moving by crawling in the same direction of the crowd, or if that is not possible, then cover your head with your arms and curl (蜷缩) up. 5.. Sometimes, finding a right posture(姿势) can save your life.

A. Make yourself know the type of ground you are standing on

B. Do not lie on your stomach or back, as this dangerously leaves your lungs unprotected

C. If you are stepped on, you should shout for help

D. Instead, move in the same direction of the crowd

E. Keep your hands up by your chest, like a boxer

F. What’s worse is that the stampede can be caused while there seems no actual danger

G. Raise your arms to the full length

 

查看答案

If you’re tired of the big cities and sandy beaches; if you don’t want to head to Disney again, perhaps it’s time for a summer holiday in space. Russia has declared(宣布) plans for its first floating hotel, 217 miles above earth, and it is something of an offering with good service.

Hosting just seven guests in four cabins(座舱), the accommodation (膳宿) will include huge windows with views back to earth and tasty microwave meals will be served instead of the ones often used by astronauts.

Just getting there will be an adventure in itself—it will take two days aboard a rocket—and it won’t exactly be a budget holiday: A five-day stay will cost you£100, 000 to£500, 000 for your journey. The hotel is due to open by 2019 and it will be far more comfortable than the International Space Station (ISS) used by astronauts and cosmonauts.

In the weightlessness of space, visitors can choose to have beds that are either vertical(垂直的) or horizontal(水平的). Tourists, who will be accompanied by experienced astronauts, will dine on food prepared on Earth and sent up on the rocket, to be reheated in microwave ovens(炉子). Many kinds of delicious food will be offered.

Iced tea, mineral water and fruit juices will be included, but alcohol will be strictly forbidden. Toilets will use flowing air instead of water to move waste through the system. Waste water will be recycled.

Sergei Kostenko, chief executive of Orbital Technologies which will construct the hotel, said: “Our planned module inside will not remind you of the International Space Station. A hotel should be comfortable inside, and it will be possible to look at the Earth. The hotel will be aimed at wealthy individuals and people working for private companies who want to do research in space.” The hotel can also be used as an emergency shelter for astronauts aboard the International Space Station if there is a disaster.

1.Which can be the best title of the passage?

A. Russia has the advanced technology in exploring space

B. The International Space Station is being built now

C. The astronauts will have a second home in space

D. Russia declares the design for its first space hotel

2.What does the underlined word “budget” in the 3rd paragraph mean?

A. expensive    B. exciting

C. cheap    D. uncomfortable

3.Which of the following statements is TRUE according to the passage?

A. The space hotel is built to remind you of the International Space Station.

B. The hotel is built with big windows so that tourists can see the earth.

C. Many kinds of drinks are offered including alcohol.

D. In the near future, a space trip for most of the people can be realized.

 

查看答案

It’s really true what people say about English politeness: it’s everywhere. When squeezing() past someone or passing through a crowd in a narrow place, people say “sorry”. When getting off a bus, English passengers say “thank you” rather than the driver. In Germany, people would never dream of doing these things. After all, squeezing past others is sometimes unavoidable(不可避免的), and the bus driver is only doing his job. I used to think the same way, without questioning it, until I started traveling to the British Isles and came to appreciate(欣赏) some more polite ways of communicating with people, and here are some more polite ways of interacting with people in UK.

People thank each other everywhere in England, all the time. When people buy something in a shop, customer and shop assistant in most cases thank each other twice or more. In Germany, it would be surprising to hear more than one thank you in such a conversation. British students thank their lecturers when leaving the room. English employers thank their employees for doing their jobs, which is different from Germans, who would normally think that paying their workers money is already enough.

Another thing I observed during my stay was that English people rarely criticize(批评) others. Even when I was working and mistakes were pointed out to me, my employers repeated several times but none of their explanations were intended as scolding me. It has been my impression that by avoiding scolding, English people are making an effort to make others feel comfortable. This also is showed in other ways. British men still open doors for women, and British men are more likely to treat(请客) women to a meal than German men. However, I do need to point out here that this applies(适用于) to English men a bit more than it would to Scottish men! Yes, the latter are a bit mean(吝啬的).

1.What is the author’s feeling of English politeness?

A. He thinks highly of it.    B. He thinks little of it.

C. He thinks it is unnecessary.    D. He thinks it goes too far.

2.What can be inferred from the passage?

A. British men never treat a woman to dinner.

B. British men think it’s unnecessary to say “thank you” to the bus driver.

C. In Germany, employers often say “thank you” to employees for their job.

D. Germans think it is unnecessary to thank workers because payment is enough.

3.We can learn from the last paragraph that Scottish men ______.

A. like to fight with each other    B. treat women more politely than English men

C. are as generous as English men    D. are unwilling to spend money for women

4.The author develops the text through the method of ______.

A. telling stories    B. making comparisons (对比)

C. giving reasons    D. doing scientific research (调查)

 

查看答案
试题属性

Copyright @ 2008-2019 满分5 学习网 ManFen5.COM. All Rights Reserved.